|Reviews for Now And The Past|
| laleo chapter 7 . 8/21/2013
Thank you for your story, but I don't think it is ready. Here it feels like a chapter is missing. The final chapter. Please, think about it and ad another to your story. Please write about how Harry and Ginny will take their NEWTs and how Harry get to be Healer or Auror or ... and Ginny be Chaser by a professional team. And how they marry and how the first child will be born and perhaps named James Sirius or Sirius Severus or ... it's on your fantasy. But just now it is not a right end in this chapter.
Thank you for reading my ranting.
| FirePhoenix86 chapter 4 . 4/15/2011
I think this story has promise, but it seriously needs some formatting help, asap. Each time a person speaks there should be a new line. You have gigantic chunks of dialogue lumped together in huge paragraphs. I can't get through a chapter easily and can't really enjoy a story where I have to sort out the formatting in my head while I read.
| mkeeg91 chapter 7 . 3/20/2011
wat a wonderful story! i loved it! :D :D
so happy Harry was able to meet the Marauders!
| Dimcairien chapter 7 . 8/13/2010
Interesting. I like the idea of the three good Marauders plus Lily finding out how the war ends. Just one major thing:
James played Chaser, not Seeker. This is confusing since the movies showed that he was a Seeker, but he really isn't.