|Reviews for Moonlight, Mayonnaise and Maggots|
| mommymac0508 chapter 6 . 8/4/2010
I loved it this one was a little dark but good
| punkfarie chapter 6 . 8/4/2010
i really do love this fic.
| Feenrai chapter 6 . 8/4/2010
I like the choppy and random style of this, and I like Bella's strange asides, like with the butter knife. I still feel I want to see some more movement in the story, but this chapter did have hints of it. There's something Bella agreed to do with Alice that we don't know the details on yet, and Bella at least made a move to say hi to Edward, even if he didn't return it. It's a sign at all, I think, that he sits by Alice if he's so nervous around A. other people in general, or B. Bella in specific. So, it's all a kind of movement, but I still look forward to the "plot...coming along soon," as you foreshadowed (albeit without much confidence) in the starting author's note:)
| Feenrai chapter 5 . 7/30/2010
Hmm...this chapter was interesting, but kind of weightless. It set up a little more guideline showing they're hanging out, and delving more into their personalities, but I'm starting to want something to happen...I guess, I'd like to start seeing some hints at what the overall plot for this story is going to end up being:)
| punkfarie chapter 5 . 7/28/2010
this chapter it cute!
i love it.
| mommymac0508 chapter 5 . 7/28/2010
I love it and oh no alice plus coffee I am scared
Lol update soon
| InspyreLove chapter 5 . 7/27/2010
I LOVE this story! Please don't leave it to be abandoned! It deserves much more than that. :D
| punkfarie chapter 4 . 7/22/2010
JIZZ. IN. MY. PANTS.
Store for posers, huh? would that be a...Hot Topic?
| Fragile Human chapter 4 . 7/21/2010
heeyyyy :) nice chap. definitely going to listen to those two songs - i always love to hear what inspires the authors. i also LOVE LOVE LOVE (as in, really hard) the way you gloss over edward. i know you said it was intentional and i agree wholeheartedly that its perfect. its like she cant see the forest for the trees (or however that goes, i'm always mixing up metaphors lol) he's so mind-blowingly gorgeous that she cant actually make out his features (thats how it goes in my head) looooove it :) keep up the fabulous writing (as you always do my darling)
| Feenrai chapter 4 . 7/21/2010
I really loved the first song reference...leave it to you to pick a song like "Jizz in my Pants" for the scene between Bella and Edward...roflmao! I wonder how many people actually recognized it and knew it was adding a humorous twist to the story, not just a romantic one.
I'm afraid I've never heard of the airborne toxic event though...what kind of music is it? I'll have to look it up sometime.
Good chapter btw:) Same old Alice! I kind of liked the bit about the band shirts, because I hate people who wear a band shirt just because it looks cool, but don't know the band. I've seen many cool band shirts, even for bands I knew, but won't buy unless I truly feel I'm a fan. Consequently the only band shirts I currently own are A.F.I...but now I'm rambling! I kind of like these short chapters, because it goes with the feeling and flow of the story. Kind of whimsical shorts, you know?
| mommymac0508 chapter 4 . 7/21/2010
Small medium or large I will review I love it justy
The way you write it I love your crazy mind update
| Fragile Human chapter 3 . 7/15/2010
Hahaha I love it I love it I love it! Did you design the chapter around that last comment? Its hysterical! Hmmm the boy appears... I like that you didn't over do his first appearance. Well played! Just a bit of mystery, of curiosity, leave us all hanging... You're so good at this writing thing :)
| Feenrai chapter 3 . 7/14/2010
This story is all over the place! Sort of like the main character, right? So, I'm guessing the Cullen's are human in this right? Just by the Alice cheerleader story. Interesting chapter-the payback made me giggle _
| punkfarie chapter 3 . 7/14/2010
yea. remind me not to ever piss you off.
even though you live 2k miles away. i'd still fear for my life. lol
| Lynathia chapter 3 . 7/14/2010
ohh, I loved it again :) yeah, that really was a little of Eddy, but I won't mind because Alice was super. and Bella too. I hope they will kick some more bich-ass, that was just too funny, and they deserve that. god knows I hate that kind of people, though now people in my new school don't mess with me, theya haven't have a chance. Though one idiot tried, poor thing. She was in my class in my old school, but almost nobody likes her in the new one because she's one annoying airhead. well, enough for that. I wish an update soon, so keep on writing, or else...