Reviews for You Were Mine
xxMarkSallingsBabyGirlxx chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
I like this story. I can actually relate to this story. My parents got divorced when I was young. Me and my sister went from house to house every week. Sometimes we'd be there for two weeks if my mom was travelling. I really liked this story. I have one comment though:

Noah is a jackass for cheating on Rachel.

That's all. Keep up the good work.
change in subtlety chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
that was beautiful, every word of it was and every word fitted in perfectly

i thinl you should continue at least one more chapter as a kind of epilogue but it's also brilliant on it's own :D
xokittyiunox chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
Absolutely beautiful story.
Alabamabug chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
This story is just so good. I had tears in my eyes at the end when she asked if he wanted to join them at the ice cream shop. I would love to read a companion piece to this in his POV. Awesome!
dGurl1011 chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
you should continue this. :)
madam-mustard chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
oh, that's so great! i felt so bad for Rachel...there's a Loop restaraunt in my town too, i was like omg! ;) great story, i loved it.
Berlian chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
LOVE IT:) great story,,make me cry a little bit.. Please don't say it's just oneshot? continue please.. With Puck grovelling and they patch up their marriage:)
allielovesyou chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
awww poor rachel
Zolton chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
Love it so far, I hope she can forgive him in time.