Reviews for Rue's Lullaby: The Source
Emma chapter 1 . 5/5/2014
Beautiful, bloody and dark. This perfectly describes what I imagined as the Dark Days. Excellent work...keep it up.
A chapter 1 . 3/27/2014
Oh my god. That, was, amazing! I can't wait for more, your story has a sense of cruelty in the way the words are written, which I love!
Ivan chapter 1 . 1/22/2014
Loved every bit of it. Please write more!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
Amazing. Really amazing.
brigrove chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
Brilliant last line

The lullaby lay down the network of explosives. The berries lit the fuse.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
finally! someone who uses correct grammar.
jayfeather97 chapter 1 . 9/19/2010

This is amazing! Such an original and unique story :)

More hunger games, please! 3
CatPokemonFuzz chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
So good and so real, I began to cry near the middle because of the sadness. You did well to capture the crulity of the Capitol! I HOPE PRESIDENT SNOW DIES IN MOCKINGJAY!
Viviane Renard chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
You write a very absorbing one-shot. You pick your scenes wisely, each one different but flowing fluidly from the one before. I love how the mockingbirds/jays and the song are the focal point to connect everything, just as they play a powerful role in the Hunger Games. Keep up the fantastic work!
Silverstardust99 chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
Brilliant. And quite frankly one of the better stories on here, little to no grammatical errors. Awesome, and quite frankly I loved reading it:D
Rena Pudding chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
Wow! This was really good! So original...I've never read anything with a similar storyline.

It was so dark, and possibly could have happened.

Keep writing.
Ari chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
Wow...this is amazing! I love it. It's such an original idea, and it's really well done.

It was kinda depressing, but it was so good, too!
wolfchasing chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
It never ceases to amaze me your story-writing ability, Tub.

That, was beautiful. Dark, but undoubtedly beautiful. I loved it.

Wolfy. xx