Reviews for Checkmate
Guest chapter 1 . 12/23/2016
This is one hell of a oneshot. I am reviewing to show support, since most dont review. Merry Christmas, m8!
SupremeGuardianOfTrueLoveKairo chapter 1 . 3/11/2016
That was simply beautiful, so sweet, romantic, tender and hilarious.

I loved this, Touya & Touko's relationship was adorable,
their personalities go together well.

I also love how personal & honest Touko is with her feelings towards Touya,

when she tells him "dont" move away from her and how bold she is when wrapping around his arm...truly loved it.

I also liked the inclusion of Togekiss, it really tied in with their love.

You portrayed their love beautifully,

thanks for one of my favorite Touya x Touko fics.
Hidden Lines chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
Whoas, this was awesome. Your writing is amazing, makes me want to play the Tales series games just to understand your other stories.

I like Black and White's personalities, it just seems to work. But why do so many Chessshipping stories have May as White's cousin? I never played the B/W games myself, so idk o_O
light-chiix3 chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
this story was so sweet...l simply loved it! :)
X chapter 1 . 4/12/2011
the point of this?
dragoniall chapter 1 . 4/11/2011
In your face, lol XD Nice. My fave ChessShipping fic :)
GlassSuicune chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
This...was awesome! :D Me likey!
xEryChan chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
I seriously am a ChessShipper already o.O

This story was great. You're a talented writer. Your descriptions are great. I love both Black and White's personality. Haha, Black is so oblivous to everything xP I'm so favoritng this story!

Great Job and keep it up! 8D
tooAWESOME4u chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
I am now offically a ChessShipper. Even before the game comes out! XD

Story was awesome, and I love how you described the other regions! So poetic!

Love White's personality! Poor Black... so oblivious! :P

- Kawaii Girl XD
Snoaz chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
It's weird reading about a game that hasn't been released yet, but I can now say that I am offically a Chestshipper. 3

I absolutely loved the interaction between Black and White, and the addition of their Pokémon, who had great personalities of their own. All in all it was just great read :D

Oh, and after this story I love Black even /more/ than I did before. Which is quite an achievement, I must say.

Chew-a-Pick chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
I love the little gestures you put in, such as Black's shoving his hand into his pocket. It really gives personality to the characters. :D
lmfeo chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
Oh my gosh, this is too cute!

I loved Black's and White's personalities. Instant fave from me. :]
ThisAccountIsNullAndVoid chapter 1 . 7/1/2010

Ah, poor Black! XD! Poor guy, his friend suddenly coming onto him like that!

I liked the bit with Togokiss! WHY IS EVERYONE ELSE SUCH A GENIUS! DX!
UnVeRsEd chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
Gahaha, White's a tricky one, huh? We all know who the dominant one iiiis~! XD

I hope their personality's like this in the game, because i was *very* amused while i read this. "when will you just shut up and kiss me?" priceless. i lol'd SO hard. (excuse me if i quoted that wrong, i can only open one tab at a time ;)

but yeah, i enjoyed this! Mijumaru and Tsutarja were hilarious. Tsutaja's really earned the nickname "Smugleaf" XD

Keep this up, your oneshots are always amazing~


PS: IAIS? :3
aestheticisms chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
What are you talking about? This trumps my story like, seven million times! AND COUNTING.

XD I loved it! It was so...perfect, the way you describe everything.

*squees & adds to the community* I love Mijumaro. 33333 It's so cute.

Anyways, fantastic job, Ang~ :D

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