|Reviews for Be Come One With Me, da?|
| Endlessly-Ending chapter 1 . 16h
I have to say. This is one of my new favorite one shots and fanfic a in general. The overall quality of writing is absolutely fantastic! I was very moved by this story and it tugged at my heart. I really wish there were more stories like this. Please continue to write this fantastically! :3
| Songbook12 chapter 1 . 6/22
I'm not sure if it was a happy ending or not, but I liked it!
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/28
Too grossed out after the spoon thing to read any more...
| jiknji hi chapter 1 . 12/29/2014
good but werid
| PrincessTeutonicKnight chapter 1 . 11/9/2014
I really enjoyed it. I think you should write more RoChu. It was perfect!
| Feli deviando chapter 1 . 7/25/2014
um it was a really good job tho I hoped that yao wouldn't like ivan anymore. everything else was fine except the spoon :I
| iHorizon chapter 1 . 4/11/2014
Aww the end was so cute!
| Jenavive RoseThorne Gemstone chapter 1 . 1/31/2014
It was good (not my cup of Earl Grey Tea though.) I was wondering why Ivan-sama and Yao-sama was used. Was Japan there, since I highly doubt that countries that don't speak Japanese would use those endings if it's in English...
Well, Do svidaniya, Comrade!
| MikaitoShion chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
;w; oh my gosh
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
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| mutehouse chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
…I was so moved that I could hardly prevent my tears from running out of my eyes…
You 're excellent,I have to story really made me want to translate it into Chinese and share it with the Rochu lovers in Baidu Post Bar…
At first I thought Ivan was completely bad but finally…
Well,there's a saying in china:who is hatefully is also was what your story reminded me of.
And Yao…it seems that all the damn thing was caused by himself…but finally he forgave Ivan(or Ivan forgave him?I am not sure)
Thank you so much for your work!
| AngelRuby235 chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
Oh God! What struck me the most in ds fic was the excellent writing quality...your literature skills are pretty mature I must say:-) the deep angst, the unfathomable despair,the ever-lingering sorrow & insecurities, madness, anguish, agony & later forgiveness, happiness,peace...all has been expressed beautifully in the entire fic:-) I admit you've done quite a wonderful job as an author here. You shouldn't be afraid to post ds kinda story.
However, yes ds was an exaggeration of Ivan's mental instability (since I love Ivan like crazy some parts DID highly disturb me)...it was hard to believe he could harm Yao in that...that...horrendous way...since he loves Yao right to the point of obsession. Ds could be due to the his devastating condition withering away in utter loneliness yet his torturing techniques were a bit far-fetched. Even Yao was an epitome of kindness here, the real Yao would've killed Ivan but still I am glad that he forgave him 'cause I would've died of vast remorse for Ivan if he didn't, so Thank you for giving ds story the happy ending it deserved. After everything these two have went through, they deserve another chance of living together in complete bliss:-)
I hope you understand that I meant no offense by ds review, I merely spoke my mind, nothing else:-)
Ds was a fic of great depth & feelings:-) truly amazing work!
Thank you once again.
| Fyoex chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
Loved it! Hauntingly beautiful.
| Riluo Beijing Kirkland-Wang chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
| perks of being a sherlockian chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
oh whos hong kongs mother?