Reviews for Dragon Age: The Kill
maradeux chapter 23 . 10/12/2014
Poor Shayle, poor Zevran... I love your writing so much, Shadow. And I also love this story. But it's been three years since... Is there any hope? :(
Nette chapter 23 . 1/28/2014
I absolutely love this story! Please, please, please with sugar on top continue writing it.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/8/2013
just saying - i think youve captured zev brilliantly
Like A Singing Bird chapter 23 . 12/14/2012
Can I be the one billionth person to say this and beg for you to continue the story soon?! Suspense can be bad for the heath, you know.
lovehfilms chapter 23 . 10/5/2012
PLS PLS PLS continue this story this and the hunt are the best ive read
rimedragona chapter 23 . 9/18/2012
I remember reading this a long while ago, and loving it. :3 I got to thinking about it again lately, and so I looked it up, hoping there would be more chapters, and there were! Yay! Sadly, still not finished, but there is always hope, yes?

I am liking Xai's character more and more. Not that I LIKE him as a person, just that his character is great. :) And now I am wondering about this Anansal, as well. I do really hope he is what he says. I suspect this Phaedra lady means to gain control of the senate and introduce her own ways of treating slaves into Tevinter. ... Or at least I can hope. ;p

I really would love to see more for this story at some point! After all, it has stuck in my mind and kept me on edge for about 2 years now, and that speaks to the quality of the writing. :)
Bloodsong 13T chapter 23 . 5/24/2012
oh... its not finished? ! d'oh!

i know i just said it one review ago... but your writing and plotting is SO solid! i'm in envy. the whole thing going on with shayle... and the rescue/escape plan that goes every which way but right... and zevran getting injured, he must really hate that. man, it just makes the story so meaty!

xai is still... becoming more and more interesting. dangit, cuz i enjoyed hating his guts. love the trigger-phrases though... that's killer. :)

well done, and above all... keep working! ;)
Bloodsong 13T chapter 16 . 5/20/2012
heyas, sold!

i have been reading along a while; thought i'd drop you a note/fanmail. ;) i'm really enjoying 'the kill'! it's a lot more in-depth than i expected. you really bring in a lot of characters to flesh out the plot, and sub-plots and everything. i'm in awe.

and i'm loving your place descriptions. and the whole flashback/flashforward thing with the infiltration, between doing it and the old 'mission impossible' talking about the plan. that's really smooth and keeps things moving along at a good pace, and the reader is kept informed.

you are a mighty fine writer, and plotter. in fact, i was thinking... i just finished an ebook i got on amazon (for free), and the story was fine, but the writing and polish was certainly lacking. both 'the hunt' and 'the kill' are of a much higher standard.

and dangit, i used to hate xai so much. now i'm starting to think he might be okay. :)
Girl-chama chapter 23 . 1/4/2012
I had to take the time to log onto a real computer and leave a real review for this chapter. Xai Merras. I think he might be my favorite character. An OC. Imagine that!

And Zevran, reading so well what's going on between Shianni and Xai- I am nervous for Enansal. I don't want him to be a spy! But I'm ready for Xai to be right about everything. Still holding out that he will end up with Shianni, but not holding my breath too. Does that make sense? We'll see, though.

Shayle! No! That scene was SO Dragon Age it's ridiculous! Backstabbing and double-crossing. Gerta will get her comeuppance, I'm sure.

Thanks for picking the story up again (perhaps you never let it down? Anyway, thank you!)
Girl-chama chapter 22 . 1/2/2012
Daaaaang. I love Xai. And he never breaks character, even at his breaking point.
lilachsh chapter 22 . 12/28/2011
as always written with a great understanding of your charchters. i just love every dynamic between xai and shianni. she is so brave to stand up for the slave and face the angry and terrifying xai(even if not in combat) and she doesnt even realize it.

can't wait for another update.
naomis8329 chapter 23 . 12/26/2011
Oh heck, I hope shayle will be ok. I would also like to see her get her revenge also on the thieving little tyke.

I had hoped that Xai would start to loosen up a little but then again maybe it will take a little more time. He really should start trusting people, he's not a crow any more.

Thank you for another wonderful chapter

Take care

Naomi xxx
CynderJenn chapter 23 . 12/26/2011
Greta is such a b-i-t-c-h, I hope Zev gets wind of what she did and hunts her down for Shayle :)
naomis8329 chapter 22 . 12/26/2011
Was thinking of this story the other day and low and behold a chapter turns up in my in box lol.

Xai being his wonderful obnoxious self and Zevran his amazing cockiness assured lol. I think he feels something for out Shianni yes. Maybe Xai will learn to live like a "normal" person again with the help of Ciela hmmm, to damaged persons healing together.

We'll have to wait and see I guess. He got away and survived I don't see why he can't help Ciela and the others do the same to be honest.

In any event thank you for a wonderful Christmas present.

Take care

Naomi xxx
Rose Tinted Contact Lenses chapter 22 . 12/14/2011
Glad to see this is still being updated! I stumbled across "The Hunt" a few months ago on BSN - it was the second (and still a favourite) fanfic I ever read, and what actually made me consider writing myself - and so was happy to see a sequel.

Anyway, nice to see Xai being his, er... usual self, and I love how you write Shianni and Zevran. Look forward to more.
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