Reviews for Valentine's Colors
BlackKuro23 chapter 1 . 3/15
Good story
TheShadowHeros chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
Nice oneshot
My Wunderwaffle iz missin chapter 1 . 4/19/2011
Funny and awesome. Always been a big fan of Black X White. Planning to write one of my own soon, but for now, I'll see what the pros do
aestheticisms chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
Haha, this was cute. Just a suggestion~ When typing out dialogue remember to put press that handy-dandy 'enter' button.

Ex:

Before: "Hey, White?" "Yes?" "Do you still want that necklace we saw before?" "Of course, I do!"

After:

"Hey, White?"

"Yes?"

"Do you still want that necklace we saw before?" "

Of course, I do!"

See how nice and easy it is to read now?

Either way, I liked this story~~
MidnightheartXxX chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
Some grammer issue's.. I cant really explain so I'll show you.

.Example.

"But you have me don't you?" Black kissed White again. "Just sucks, I only have chocolate for you though" "Heh, think of it as an advance White Day gift." "Yeah sure..." "You better reward me big time tonight..." "PERVERT!"

Should have been

"But you have me don't you?" Black kissed White again. "Just sucks, I only have chocolate for you though"

"Heh, think of it as an advance White Day gift."

"Yeah sure..."

"You better reward me big time tonight..."

"PERVERT!"

Thats it.. Other then that it was good.
TheGiftOfHeavenSun chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
Well, well... Interesting story!

Like this!

You have made good work!

Keep it up!