|Reviews for My Work is Not Yet Finished|
| BJ2 chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
Beautiful, thank you.
| nevadagal chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
what a neat story, so sensitively told, revealing each member of the family in their way. thank you for this!
| MGM chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
This was a lovely story. I especially liked how you described each man as he visited. You didn't use any of the cliches (gentle giant, patriarch, etc) we've come to expect, but I knew instantly who each man was. You wrote of each of them as a mother would think of her boys.
| Battered notebook of stories chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
What a sweet story! I have lots of good memories of watching "Bonanza" with my Dad when I was growing up. Thanks for posting this. :)