Reviews for Tempest
09Alice1 chapter 1 . 8/24/2015
This was so hot!
And needs a sequel! tell me there's one! xD
Killjoy4322 chapter 1 . 9/1/2014 likey
TidusGT chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
make them take the next step in their relationship!
Beizanten chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
The boys just can't bring themselve to make the first move, maybe they're scare of rejection and risking friendship. Great story
MoGo1994 chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
Amazing. I love all of the similies and metaphors! The whole story feels like a thunderstorm; the growing intensity, and the release of pressure, or in this case, a release of passion. And to never know the other was doing the same thing. It's awesome. Keep it up!

Aurora Apocolypta chapter 1 . 7/3/2010

Awsome idea, very smart