Reviews for Smooth, Real Smooth
dwparsnip chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
Ah excuse to study Diana's legs, and the last last line...awesome.

Nice one KN...nice.
PrincessJazzy23 chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
Hahaha! I loved this. It was so funny.

I think it was pretty cool tht when i scrolled down the page, there was an ad for laser hair removal. lol

great story! keep up the good work!
Whigmus Lister chapter 1 . 7/1/2010

This made me laugh:

"Do I have hairy legs?"

I can just imagine poor Wally's face... surprise, confusion, embarrassment... totally unfair.

You and Geeky are dangerousl people, you know that? I used to think that there were only so many situations that Bats & Wondy could find themselves in that would create the kind of tension that you seem to relish and are supremely gifte writing about. You're constantly proving me wrong... they seem to be unlimited!

Well done, my friend.
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