|Reviews for The InGen Conspiracy|
| ercys girl chapter 3 . 7/12/2010
I think you've captured the Jurassic Park characters nicely in this one, and throwing in input from the Net characters it's definitely giving it, especially in this 3rd chapter, another dimension to the story. I think as well what would have been nice is to have Angela ask more about the systems. I know she asks about them, but in the hatchery I think she could have asked, although it doesn't hinder the story in anyway how its been done.
I sense it will get interesting from here on in.
| ercys girl chapter 2 . 7/7/2010
This is an interesting story thus far.
I'm intrigued to see how you manage to blend the two medias together over the story, should definitely make for an interesting read.