|Reviews for Moving On|
| Jai chapter 1 . 10/30/2013
| FifthHallow chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
most realistic portrayal or Edward I've read
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
OMG. You made me like Bella. OMG. I LOVE YOU!
| Gracfully chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
neat like how Bella talked to Edward like she did
| Legolas' Girl 31 chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
Awesome one shot, I loved it.
| Aly of Ravenclaw chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
"It was called One hundred and one cookie recopies." LOL i love it when people make references to Buffy's cookie speech 3
and I really like how you portrayed Edward as a sad, woe-is-me, sexist idiot, and I like seeing how Bella could have turned out. The biggest reason Twilight bugs me is because its sexist and has zero character development.
| ratherbereading125 chapter 1 . 10/12/2011
this is really good! i think it would actually make a really good story of you have the energy to lengthen it :)
| ShoshonaTheRose chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
Really sweet! Please make this into a story cuz it has really great potential, like Edward trying to get Bella back and taking "down" all the demons for her?
| the dark euphie chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
that was absolutely adorable; think we can get a sequel?
| NarutoCrazy001 chapter 1 . 3/3/2011
OMG! Have you seen the movie Labyrinth by Jim Henson starring David Bowie and Jennifer Connelly? If not watch it cause your Edward sounded A LOT like Sir Didymus. Great story. I always wanted Bella to have a stronger character. I mean even if the love of my life/soulmate watched me sleep all night without me knowing, I would dump him. So WTG for strong women!
| Team1DUnionJcat chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
Loved It! :-D
| Kat chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
loved it! made me laugh so much. could do with a little bit of punctuation and grammar editing to make it easier to read, but otherwise, great!
| chris62287 chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
lol, loved it!
| Ithileon chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
Oh my god, that was hilarious!
| shiftyless chapter 1 . 12/8/2010
:) like it good & neat the same time