Reviews for My First Date with Katniss Everdeen |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Please ignore those flames. This is a very good companion piece. Do not allow haters to discourage you. You’re a very talented writer. Don’t let people tell you otherwise. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was well written and very believable to go with canon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’ve enjoyed this story so much. Thank you:) It was really well written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Super cute! |
![]() ![]() you do realize the fact that you wrote a hundred thousand words of nothing, right? you wrote 100,000 words, and it affected nothing. literally nothing. what the fuck is the point of this story? the fact that this is one of the "top rated" hunger games fics is shameful. literally 110k words of meaningless bullshit, with hundreds of pages of retarded dialogue, stupid miscommunication, horrendous general characterization that is stupidly inconsistent for some unfathomable reason. what is the point of this? every night of prayer i will thank allah that you quit writing amateur fiction, because your work is not and will never be any good. ive read both this and the other one named "scars," and jesus fuck, these were unbearable to go through. as ive said a fuck ton of times in this wall of text, it was literally pointless writing. a slog of emptiness. 100k words without any significance. you have truly accomplished something terrible. sad that you were not one of kyle rittenhouse's victims, "KenoshaChick." |
![]() ![]() any story titled like this one is destined to be absolute shite |
![]() ![]() ![]() Peeta’s conversation in his mind is so funny at times. If only Katniss would know. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Prim, best gurl ever. Although I feel bad for the gift. I get Peeta’s reasoning but Prim was just so excited to give it to him and he was not able to enjoy it. It will make her sad too. And the AN, I love the advice to stay calm. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god so flipping sad |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just realized the "natural blonde" joke. It's funny because Jennifer Lawrence is a natural blonde, so in a way, Peeta isn't wrong XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() very cute |
![]() ![]() 10 years later... and Peeta is still a goddamn simp AHAHAHAA In all seriousness though, your characterization is so on point! |
![]() ![]() OMG! I love it and I'm so glad I read this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Perfect |
![]() ![]() ![]() You’vre created the perfect atmosphere in this firsy chapter... incredible |