Reviews for My First Date with Katniss Everdeen |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love your version peeta 3 and the relationship between peeta and prim is just adorable. I'm glad you continued this story, it has plenty of potential |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love Peeta's persaverance in the situation. Katniss seems so impossible, but it looks like he's figure out his edge. Prim is awesome. And his reaction when she gives him a hug is great. I'm interested to see how Gale will fit into this equation. Looking forward to more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is just so damn cute! Not many people show Peeta as a nervous teenage boy who has a huge crush on a girl. He's usually so sure of himself in the romance area in other fanfics. I love how you had Katniss be in her shell and slowly begin to come out of it because I'm sure that's how she would really be if they had met before the Games. Love it! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah Peeta is ever the faithful determined lover while Katniss is the cold and hardened heart. I hope Katniss softens soon... |
![]() ![]() ![]() My dear God I love this! Peeta's personality isn't his own, but I like it. And I really like the outsider's look you give to Katniss. I love how she'sdifferent fromt he otehr girls, and how you show the relationship between her and Prim well. I love Prim! lol She does seem the bouncy type and, who knows, maybe she's going to give Katniss a run for her money by trying to set Peeta up with her! Lol This is very cute and adoring—I'm certain you know this already from your lovely reviews, though. You're writing touched upon many elemnts in the actual novels and I am very facinatedwith it. I'll read Scars when I get the chance, because you're one of those once in a month amazing writers I find! Haha Keep writing! 3Ellie |
![]() ![]() Mmm... Love it! You have a talant!:)(: |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwh. This is adorable. I like the idea of "player Peeta," haha. And how Katniss is so different from all the other girls. "I will have to send Prim some cookies or offer to do her homework or something because Primrose Everdeen is the world's best wingman." That's the most AMAZING sentence ever. It made me laugh so hard. haha. Anyway. This was great. Thanks for writing this! -Demigod |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gah. Katniss is so intimidating. But you write Peeta so wonderfully. I'm amazed at how good a grasp you have on the boy and your writing's the perfect vessel to let him out. It's such a great piece of fluff! Awesome job. |
![]() ![]() ok so im a huge fan of scars but this just makes me love peeta so much more and the ending was so sweet, and prim being the wingman made me giggle and smile at times, this is really sweet! pls continue, will u continue? *prim's puppy dog eyes* very good story, amazingly written. :D y do i have such a bad feeling about gale in this story? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, this is so adoringly sweet. I'm pretty sure this is what goes on inside the real Peeta's head anyway (real? He's a fictionical character that's barely real) but you knbow what I mean, hopefully. And don't worry about Scars, it'll come to you. Some sunshine is nice, this story made me smile. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I swear you make me love Peeta more and more each time you write him (which is pretty difficult considering how much he owns me already lol). This was so adorble- the awkwardness and his attempts to engage her in conversation. It was true to character and how I would imagine things would have gone between them without the games. Thank you for sharing, this was a joy to read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gah! Don't be stuck on Scars - I need an update. ;) LOL! This is too funny. I can imagine him accidentally shouting her name when he's trying to get her attention. Poor, unprepared Peeta. No wonder he never approaches Katniss in the books. :) And thank God for Prim. "Actually, I do those," I reluctantly admit. You never know if that will impress people or not. LMAO, best line. And the bit with the flowers is so cute. I have a feeling from the books that Prim is Team Peeta and I like how she bonds with Peeta in this story. And if only Peeta knew that Katniss was keeping tabs on him, as well! Anyway, great story. Very cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was excellent! Written extremely well and I would love it if you continued. Peeta's POV was perfect. Now I'm going to go check out Scars... -Tasting Raindrops- |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwwww! This is a really cute story! I absolutely love it~ I especiallly love the voice you gave Peeta, Katniss, and Prim, very realistic :) Please continue it? nappy sappy HAPPY :)) |