Reviews for Those Lilies
Capital WHY chapter 1 . 1/19/2011



To die. HE TREATED HER LIKE DIRT! *sob* poor Lyra... ;_;


aestheticisms chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
Angst, it's beautiful angst.

...I can't really say how this makes me feel. It's...perfect angst.

...uh, *thinks* You're a great writer, yes?

TheGiftOfHeavenSun chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
Aw, man. It is extremely saddening, but impressively written.

I like EthanxLyra... But well...

Lyra is paranoid maybe, because Ethan always visits her. Ethan's saying about death on Lyra is maybe something... So Lyra's pain goes away, am I right?
kaori kuni chapter 1 . 7/3/2010

Two options: she has esquizophrenia or Ethan is actually that much of an asshole. Second option being the msot likely for me.

Like, he had let go of her a long time ago and didnt care anymore. Don't know what lilies mean, but if he only brings those is cause he doesnt care, and just sends her whatever the lilies mean.

The two and fainting I didnt understand. Also the Six's for my saint... :/ I wonder what that means.

Diee Ethan, diee.

radelhorror chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
God, this is so heartbreaking. Well-written, though. Did Ethan stop caring about her, or was Lyra just paranoid? It seems that he still cared as he kept visiting her.