aw...this story is realyy interesting, you HAVE to continueit,PLEASE :( Ireally like it, so update!

IS More coming.

Is this a dead end?

Good stories are rare and this good one needs to be finished. Jesssie has a tiny touch of 'Sue', but in this case, who cares.

Hi! I just read the whole story as far as it's up. I think it's quite good but you have managed to fall down in a couple of cliché-traps. Snapes daughter, sorted into Gryffindor, stuff like that.

I'm glad that Jessie hangs around with the Hufflepuffs most of the time, but why didn't you sort her in that house? I'm sure there must be brave Hufflepuffs too. But then I've always had a soft spot for Hufflepuffs...

I like Hannahs paint-stains. That made me smile :) maybe because I always manage to get paint somewhere if I'm painting. You can always see what we did on the last arts class by looking if I have clay in my hair or coal or maybe paint somewhere in my face...

M, PF, P, & W... Can it be the Marauders..? A little adventure coming up?

The formatting is a bit strange in some of the chapters in the fic and I've found a couple of typos, but I don't remember exactly which chapters they where in... Do you have a beta for grammar/spelling?

I know I mentioned that chapter you wrote in first person POV before. Since the rest of the story is told in third person POV you might want to rewrite that part so it fits the rest.

Since you'r fic is mainly about a original character this link might be helpful: writersu.

It's called the Mary Sue litmus-test and I often use it when I deal with my OCs, just to be on the safe side.

I like the little quotes you have in the ends of some of the chapters. I know, this hasen't anything to do with the fic, but I think it's fun reading quotes by different people :)

That cat.. I'm starting to get curious, I didn't quite grasp where he comes from or why she keeps her, but maybe that was intentional.

I wish you would have sorted her into another house... Gryffindor *and* in Harrys year seems a bit cliché.

I think it had been beter to put her in another house, then she would be able to show off her ability to speak latin. If one of the students was really good at that Harry surely would have noticed, and theres nothing like that in the books so.. You've limited the story a little putting her in Gryffindor, since you don't have the same freedom deciding what can happen on the lessons.

Another thing.. I don't think she would have learned Percys name the first day. I had found it more believable if you had written something about the ghost dropping walking sticks on the prefect instead. (but that might just be me being picky...:))

Kind of confusing with the change from third person to first person between the chapters. But who am I to complaint really.. I've done exactly the same thing in one of my fics.

It's an interesting idea about why Snape turned to the "good" side, I've read a couple of fics that deals with why he became a deatheater, but not many on why he turned his back on them.

It's about time Jessie had something to smile

about chickadee. And I've really enjoyed this one

just like all the prior chapters. Now you have your

fifth review for this chapter get off your bottom

and post for the next one!

It's about time Jessie had something to smile

about chickadee. And I've really enjoyed this one

just like all the prior chapters. Now you have your

fifth review for this chapter get off your bottom

and post for the next one!

This may sound blunt and fairly rude but... you take too long! Write faster... and longer too! Ahhhh... stop takng so long, explain everything and make someone or something to take action!

Good chapter - need more soon

Madame Padfoot

man this is good. I mean my heart is really breaking for these characters, even Snape. Please don't leave it there for long!

wow...it's interesting. I hope you write each chapter a bit longer coz i want to read more. P

please keep on writing!

hey... this is really good,so sa though. Hurry up with the fic!

Okay hon, since you so very badly wanted me to

write what I'd told you about your story on your

review list, here you go.

I'm really enjoying what you've written so far,

from the first line your story grabbed my attention

and has left me anxious to see the next

instalments. Whenever you tell me that you've

added another part to the story I have to immediately

go to the site to read it. Now... you evil

creature stop leaving me with more and more

questions with each chapter and start answering

some of them! And Crampton better get what he

deserves! Nasty, bitter disgusting, vomitous,

vile creature that he is!

come on when does she meet sev?

quick!

poor dear. why is the ministry keeping her from her father? keep writing so i can find out. keep up the good work.