|Reviews for May Flowers|
| paulac45 chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
Good elements to it, but was confused for a minute before realized you had jumped 10 years in time, no defined scene change to make it clear. Shame the story rather left things hanging.
| Militant Delusionalist chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
Great job. Just one thing. I think you need to make the seperation from post infarct to Mayfield better.