|Reviews for Matrix of Sparks|
| AnimeFreak71777 chapter 5 . 6/2
| Monki-Neko chapter 1 . 4/3
Good plot and overall well-executed but I did notice several minor grammatical and stylistic changes I would reccomend. For the grammer, I just feel as if certain changes in diction for certain words and a consistent tone in dialog would be fine. As for the style, to me, it felt as if you could have elaborated on certain parts of the chapter to add more detail to the narrative-introspection, setting, character interaction, etc.
| kyubbi lover 98 chapter 5 . 12/12/2014
Update soon please
| shdwmstrDrake chapter 5 . 12/11/2013
Could use updates. Not much story structure.
| willam and jack and jake chapter 5 . 10/30/2013
very interesting can't wait to read more
| willam and jack and jake chapter 4 . 10/30/2013
so that who the creator is
| willam and jack and jake chapter 3 . 10/30/2013
| willam and jack and jake chapter 2 . 10/30/2013
| willam and jack and jake chapter 1 . 10/30/2013
| SparkFanLove chapter 5 . 8/15/2013
Great story! Love it!
When are you going to update the next chapter?
So excited to read what happens next!
PLEASE UPDATE! UPDATE PLEASE!
| Okami Princess chapter 5 . 8/10/2013
You know, I wonder if Sam would ever think that Harry would have the more important role as the Avatar of the Spark of Creation (what I'm calling the creation half of the All-Spark), since Harry would be the reason for the Cybertronians continued existence as a species, until someone points out that Sam's role as the Avatar of the Spark of Knowledge (what I'm calling the knowledge half of the All-Spark) was just as important, since without him, the complete knowledge, which means not only their technology, but the history and culture of the Cybertronians would be lost forever, with only what the Autobots and Decepticons have with them left. And someone should point out that Harry had the raw end of the deal since it was likely that due to the powers of the Spark of Creation, he's probably going to end up outliving most of his friends and family, while Sam would probably have a normal life span, probably passing on the Spark of Knowledge to a new Avatar at the end of his lifespan. (Harry could probably only pass on the Spark of Creation if he was killed to one of his descendants.)
| AutoCon1 chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
Please would you continue Matrix of Sparks!
| Aralaiqualasse chapter 5 . 4/5/2013
I loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee it...oooo...an all-spark Harry, created a hidden city...please please please update soon...will our beloved creator have a partner? i mean lovey-duvey partner?
| DarkFireNyx chapter 5 . 2/2/2013
Great Story! It's good! Love it!
When are you going to update it?
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
| god of all chapter 5 . 9/29/2012
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.