Reviews for Phoenix Rising
Riku Michaelis chapter 42 . 7/23/2011
The green minster is never welcomed. :/

Ahh who's the cross over character? :000
liloncroess chapter 42 . 7/23/2011
hehe..sasuke was so cute getting jealous over his older very possessive! well, can't blame him..he still doesn't know much about his passed self anyway...crossover? is it lelouch, rin okumura..hehe just guessing~ anyway, the chapter was good..can't wait for the next one..hope you'll post it soon~
DreamKaskade chapter 42 . 7/23/2011
Ahw, the sending was sooo sad /:

Poor sasu.
SeBriar chapter 42 . 7/23/2011
My cousin, my friend, and I were all reading this chapter together. When we saw the last line we collectively went, ''Oh Lord.''

Poor Sasuke has taken another of Naruto's actions completely out of context. I predict alot more angst in his future if he's already having issues in believing how much Naruto loves him at age six, no matter how many times Naruto expresses it and insists that Sasuke is the most important person in his life.

I look forward to seeing how Naruto handles his latest bout of insecurity/jealousy. Great job.
nate chapter 42 . 7/23/2011
Damn i love where this is going. All of their reactions and emotions that you have portrayed are shockingly accurate.

I also think it is a very good decision to not pair Naruto of with some chick. This story has so much substance and dimension that he really doesn't need to have a love interest.

awesome writing man *thumbs-up*

IucunditaFloridus chapter 42 . 7/23/2011
Awww. So sad for Sasuke.

Anyways, update soon.
Beloved Daughter chapter 42 . 7/23/2011
Thanks for another great chapter update! I love how much Naruto teases Sasuke! It's just so... Naruto-ish!

I also liked Gaara's appearance!

As far as the crossover is concerned, are you writing a new separate story or is this story becoming a crossover? It wasn't quite clear...
randomKitty chapter 42 . 7/23/2011
this kitty is SUPER HAPPY

i LOVE it when you update

agian another perfect chapter

in the end were sasuke was like

' Sasuke felt shadowed by those two faceless people who his Daddy still cared about so much.

"He loves them more than he loves me" '

i was like AWW poor sasuke!

i want to give him a hug X3

omg it was funny when naruto would tease sasuke then he would get all embarassed X3 so cute!


your doing an AMAZAZING job

words can't describe how amazazing it is but hey i can try

its perfect and i hope you never EVER quit this story (i would totally cry in a corner in a depressed bubble for like ever if that happened btw)

your like a writing genius!

this update made my day (it always makes my day when theres an update btw)

SO update soon!

oh jeez im rabbling im goin to stop now


ok im done now...
magicaltoothbrush chapter 42 . 7/23/2011
Hahaha It was really funny when they came out of the bathroom n the employees thought they were on the's really(can't think of the word right now) how sasuke jealous of team 7! When I was kid I used to get jealous over the stupidest things so I get where sasuke's coming from..( bt he is a jealous person tho) hopefully the character ur thinking of crossing over is a character I know :D
clippit chapter 41 . 7/22/2011
at the end sasuke was soooo adorable! XD ohhh...and it looks like suigetsu and jugo are making their appearance! i wonder what would happen next! great chapter btw! hope that you will update soon! ja ne! ;}
ChiKazex chapter 41 . 7/22/2011
Awesome story, Can't wait for the next chapter~
operagirl76 chapter 41 . 7/22/2011
I just discovered your story today and read it all in one sitting - took hours, but it was worth it! It's such a wonderful story! I love seeing how Naruto matures as a man and father, and it's great to see how loving and kind Sasuke is now that he's being raised with love. You write very well for English not being your native language - just a few grammar errors and typos here and there, but not enough to significantly distract me from this story. And I like how you incorporate canon into your story (e.g., Kyuubi chakra mode in his fight against Akane). Keep up the good work!
softdreamer chapter 41 . 7/22/2011
I like how you make Sasuke appreciate his Daddy again and again, also I hope you're gonna bring in on their secret Kakashi too

anyway thanks for the fast update and good work :)
123Sasuke chapter 41 . 7/21/2011
great story.. bt im wondering if u could give Sasuke a character you can make him a heavy sleeper or likes to draw..then maybe when he goes back to konoha he would be close to Sai (irnoy) Even allergic to strawberries(which Naruto didnt know about)
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