|Reviews for Phoenix Rising|
| otomesensei chapter 41 . 7/19/2011
thanks for the great i agree with you on the importance of chap.538
| Sukee93 chapter 41 . 7/19/2011
So great, so great, so great! A-ma-zing! :)
| CrimsonRegret478 chapter 41 . 7/19/2011
Fantastic! Keep up the great work! Can't wail till the next chapter!
| Elasticmango chapter 41 . 7/19/2011
~loved it~ I wish you luck on making the next chapter cuz I no inwould need it if I was making such an amazing story XD
| Beloved Daughter chapter 41 . 7/19/2011
Thanks for another great chapter update! I can't wait for Jugo and Suigetsu to find Naruto and Sasuke and to "see" their flabbergasted faces!
| BadButt94 chapter 41 . 7/19/2011
Well I thought that this was very cute. I felt bad for Sasuke when he had the dream, but it was still very pretty. Love it
| dan.dan.jo chapter 41 . 7/19/2011
The ending with Sasuke and Naruto was so adorable. Felt like I was going to cry.
| Sapphirus Caeli chapter 41 . 7/19/2011
Sasuke is so adorable lol I really like his character development and can't wait to see what happens
next. So I'm thinking that Juugo and Suigetsu are going to play a big part in this arc or sometime soon
right? I hope you update soon it was a great chapter and update soon please!
| anime.rules.XD chapter 41 . 7/19/2011
this was good and you are just giving more info out to help the plot
| Kwizzic chapter 41 . 7/19/2011
Amazing, as always. I don't know how you can manage to write so MUCH! I mean, I always seem to lose motivation after five or six chapters, but it's been over forty and you're still going!
Oh Great Shishou, teach me your ways! *lays prostrate at your feet* No, seriously, though, how?
There are a few grammar problems that I've been noticing in your writing that I just thought I'd tell you about. Feel free to disregard any opinions that you disagree with.
Firstly, you use a LOT of ellipses. (BTW, an ellipsis is a ... thing.) You use ellipses where a comma, a dash, or even a period would be appropriate, and it looks a little tacky.
Secondly, when writing thoughts, there isn't any need for double quotes so long as you italicize. For example: "The Sandaime would be proud" Iruka thought with nostalgia. "The Yondaime too."
Since this is italicized in the text, it looks a little silly to add double quotes. In addition, you should add a comma after 'proud', just like you would if it were a dialogue.
Anyway, love the chapter, Sasuke is adorable.
| Rosebunse chapter 41 . 7/19/2011
We're loving it! And I can't wait to see more of Jugo and Suigetsu :)
| randomKitty chapter 41 . 7/19/2011
i get so happy when i see a new update
there always fantasic
love the story
love love love!
its so well written and so many good ideas im in awe of your amazing writing skills
i cant express how awesome this story is, i need a new word to discribe the pure and utter fantastic ness of it all
:3 i cant wait for more update soon _
| Kagaseo chapter 41 . 7/19/2011
Sasuke is so cute... it's nice to see Naruto acts as a father.
Also, are you intending to make your 'spin-off' (you know, the one where Sasuke briefly regains his original age) canon? It would be nice to see a mention, or to know Kabuto's fate...
Anyway, keep up the good work.
| roboguy45 chapter 41 . 7/19/2011
I keep forgetting about Sasuke's old team, LOL they are in for a big surprise if they find him.