|Reviews for Phoenix Rising|
| SlyFox363 chapter 29 . 12/21/2010
Oh my god that was sad...
| Tetsudai-kun chapter 29 . 12/21/2010
wow...i was crying for a while there...so sad...
and i guess kids can be quite cruel without meaning to, but this... this is just horrible...
| DarkNinjaBunneh chapter 29 . 12/21/2010
This chapter almost made me cry.
| DreamKaskade chapter 29 . 12/21/2010
It's a growing up process it was bound to happen bug I have got to say that I exteeamly enjoyed this chap
| firegolem234 chapter 29 . 12/21/2010
Damn, that was a really moving chapter, when someone can bring me tears from their writing, then you know that it was something special. I have to congratulate you, it was a phenomenal chapter and very sad. Please keep up the good work.
| hentai18ancilla chapter 29 . 12/21/2010
The more I hear about Kenji the more I want to adopt him! He sounds sort of like Naruto when he was his age.
| kanazerosukenaru chapter 29 . 12/21/2010
OMG this chapter made me cry buckets...UGH! So sad but thank goodness Sasuke saw how he was acting and now he feels bad about it. I hope He is able to work things out with Naruto.
I was surprised that people wanted a much older Sasuke to come to the village...I'll be glad to see what happens.
| maxridelover chapter 29 . 12/21/2010
poor Naruto! at least Sasuke has realized how Naruto feels!
| Rabbit Pie chapter 29 . 12/21/2010
Aww... This chapter got me watery-eyed. It was great to see more of Kenji.
| Izolda chapter 29 . 12/21/2010
This chapter was a little masterpiece of literature- it was essence of real life put into fanfiction!
| alibandi chapter 29 . 12/21/2010
oh my god! It really good.
I was crying when I read this story.
Please update soon
| InMyEyesForever chapter 29 . 12/21/2010
Ouch poor Naruto!
But Sasuke's a kid still, so he probably doesn't understand the consequences of his actions. But that's what growing up is all about, isn't it?
Btw I'm a new reader and I totally love this fic! :)
It's refreshing to read about a mature Naruto and an innocent Sasuke.
Please update soon! _
| snowecat chapter 29 . 12/21/2010
Ouch, this was a difficult chapter. Great job though. What will Sasuke do when Naruto returns? Have a good holiday and hope to see more soon!
| CloudRed1988 chapter 29 . 12/21/2010
Harsh...but that happened when it comes to children to what they want...anyway plz update ASAP!
| MinieChan chapter 28 . 12/21/2010
I'm new here, I found your story by chance and I never stopped reading. Naruto with Sasuke's father is a very creative and had not read anywhere. I loved the way that you could leave everything as consistent and at the same time simple to could understand.
Sasuke love this child fascinated by his tou-chan. I think this is so perfect. I have a weakness for big stories that focus on Naruto and Sasuke in the family, because I miss that side of the manga after the two are alone and it was so tragic in their life, when I see a story in which they have a family to always read .
I like to ask one thing, this story has any chance of turning Yaoi? Narusasu? Not that I want, but I want to prevent, because if so, I would spoil the story and all the feelings that exist between them show you. I ask because I ever read a story where they were father and son and suddenly were in bed as a couple, it was traumatic for me, totally ruined the story so I'm trying to prevent.
But if it does not happen, expect more comments from me because his story is really good.
If there is a grammatical error, please releve, because I am American and I do not have English as the language fluently. I am Brazilian and I understand a bit of English and want to make it fluent.
Well that's it.
Kisses and up to the next chapter.!