|Reviews for Phoenix Rising|
| ChaosIsGolden chapter 28 . 12/3/2010
I'm glad a friend recommended your story, as I enjoyed reading each chapter.
I myself have always been a fan of Sasuke redeemed, at least if it's believable. And your story does this quite nicely.
I like how your pacing this story as well, along with the small hints of drama, humor, and adventure, you throw in. As you said this is going to be a long story, so I look forward to seeing where you take the story, and it's already steller cast of characters. I'll save my questions and wait, as I'd rather be surprised.
Thanks for a good read, looking forward to the next chapter...
| softdreamer chapter 28 . 12/3/2010
it still interesting as ever, and thanks for the fast updates and long chapters :D
| Beloved Daughter chapter 28 . 12/2/2010
I love your story! I especially love your characterization of Iruka! I laughed so hard at his reactions! Can't wait to read more!
| Grocamol chapter 28 . 12/2/2010
I don't think I'll look at a banana the same way again. :P
| sangetsuninichi chapter 28 . 12/2/2010
oohh.. im getting excited when sasuke will learn ninja techniques! i'm also looking forward about the reactions of those who are involved in the operation fox hunt when they realize that sasuke is not dead!
| Khandalis chapter 28 . 12/2/2010
Ha ha ha! That "talk" was long overdue. Lol! But ack! DX I really don't like yuri...
Anyway! Kakashi is catching on fast! XD If he ever found out, I can imagine the face he'd make. I get the feeling that Sasuke would play with his hair. :)
Thanks for the update!
| Tetsudai-kun chapter 28 . 12/2/2010
Woah intense! Lol naruto got the talk! I can just imagine him telling a teen sasuke!
| YubelChan chapter 28 . 12/2/2010
XD Lmao, poor Naruto. X3 Lol. o.o but oh my, don't tell me Kakashi is going to find out soon now. DX
| Deceptively Sane chapter 28 . 12/2/2010
Awesome chapter! Sasuke's innocence is so cute! I wasn't surprised at all when he mentioned Naruto's porn stash. With the senseis Naruto has had, it's to be expected, really.
I'm still on the edge of my seat waiting for Suigetsu, Juugo, and Karin to pop up out of nowhere. It's gonna be exciting!
Naruto had the Talk! xD I remember giving bananas wary glances for quite a while after I had to go through that. One thing I was wondering about... Why was Iruka carrying condoms in his pockets? O_O
| Izolda chapter 28 . 12/2/2010
Simply wonderful:) Naruto's a fantastic father and I'm glad others are so supportive!
| Amethyst Water Lily chapter 28 . 12/2/2010
Okay, at first when I read the summary, I was wondering how you was going to pull this off but now I'm glad that I read this far. I love this story even though it took me awhile to read. I'm glad I don't have to work. Anyway, I really look forward to the next chapter. This story is unique in its own way and I'm happy that someone finally made a story on Sasuke turning into a kid, that makes SENSE! I mean seriously, all the other stories, don't make any sense at all.
This is such a family-orientated story, I smiled throughout each chapter. Not to mention cute and precious Sasuke.
| SlyFox363 chapter 28 . 12/2/2010
Lol that was a very funny and embarasing chapter :P I don't want to know what he was using that banana for... xD I think Naruto should visit his friends tho because Sakura is probably hurting.. First she loses one brother and then the other one leaves without saying goodbye. Thats messed up! Thankyou for updating so swiftly :) I hope to see another chapter of Raven's Fall soon ;)
| mangachick1 chapter 28 . 12/2/2010
i LOVED this chapter! LOL
The talk is always a good add on and the fact that Sasuke is just ADORABLE is also a plus! i wish there was a picture of him in Naruto's arms! that would be so CUTE! XD
| goldengreaser chapter 28 . 12/2/2010
I love this stroy so much. I almost wanted to cry when Iruka found the picture.
| FirieGurl chapter 28 . 12/2/2010
this is gooood I cant wait for the next chapter update it soon