|Reviews for When It Rains|
| Chezza456 chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
AWWW! That was really good. really cute. really funny. :D
| MrSuperCzar chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
Please please please continue this! It's really cool and a great idea! :)
| YamiNoTomoyo chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
Aww, that was adorable. :D
Only one complaint. I think you were writing Ten's dialogue, not eleven. "I'm sorry," and then "Hello," with the finger wiggling. Ten, not Eleven. It's subtle but it's definitely noticeable.
.;; Tempted to rewrite this with Eleven!dialogue, just for my own sanity... Wouldn't publish it, wouldn't let it be seen by anybody besides me; it's your writing, after all.
/shrugs/ Just a cute little "what if," yeah. Well done. :)
| James Birdsong chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
| LilyHale21 chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
Lovely story. I cracked up laughing when she slapped him tho.. lol.