Reviews for Revelation
jabc4 chapter 2 . 9/5/2016
Zane S. White chapter 2 . 7/10/2016
You did a very good job on Derek's POV, Zia. So don't go all crazy on this awesomesauce story, alright?
VickiStoned chapter 2 . 2/21/2016
I haven't read the book, but judging by how steamy this story was, I'm sure you will do amazing. I, personally, think you should go for it!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/12/2015
It's super good! I keep trying to find fanfics of Derek and Chloe but there are literally, like, 5.
Guest chapter 2 . 8/3/2015
cute story
Guest chapter 2 . 12/7/2014
I think you did his pov awesomely because I think that if it was just dreak and whoever he was dating that when he us alone with him he would be romantic and all lovey dovey. Like if you have read the women of the other world books clay is like that to Elena when they are alone
Guest chapter 2 . 6/14/2014
I want more chapters
GigglingFangirl chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
Chloe, honey, that'd make everyone feel better ;)
Guest chapter 2 . 5/6/2013
I loved this story, and i thank you very much for continuing my addiction to Clerek lemmons. :) 3
ladyluck25 chapter 2 . 1/14/2013
Really good. Are you going to write a full length?
ladyluck25 chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
Good. :)
Jessica Winter chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
love it
Rodentfish chapter 2 . 11/10/2012
Dude! The story was awesome. I think you made them a little OOC, but that doesn't matter. Great work!
Get-Outta-My-Head chapter 2 . 9/17/2012
Whoa...that was awesome, you have to admit. I disagree with you though. You actually wrote Derek's POV nicely for a lemon. You should do more of these. GO CHLEREK! :)
JayJay chapter 2 . 6/15/2012
You wrote that awesomely, one of the best I've read! :)
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