Reviews for Revelation
Guest chapter 2 . 12/7/2014
I think you did his pov awesomely because I think that if it was just dreak and whoever he was dating that when he us alone with him he would be romantic and all lovey dovey. Like if you have read the women of the other world books clay is like that to Elena when they are alone
Guest chapter 2 . 6/14/2014
I want more chapters
GigglingFangirl chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
Chloe, honey, that'd make everyone feel better ;)
Guest chapter 2 . 5/6/2013
I loved this story, and i thank you very much for continuing my addiction to Clerek lemmons. :) 3
ladyluck25 chapter 2 . 1/14/2013
Really good. Are you going to write a full length?
ladyluck25 chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
Good. :)
jessicawinter chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
love it
Rodentfish chapter 2 . 11/10/2012
Dude! The story was awesome. I think you made them a little OOC, but that doesn't matter. Great work!
Get-Outta-My-Head chapter 2 . 9/17/2012
Whoa...that was awesome, you have to admit. I disagree with you though. You actually wrote Derek's POV nicely for a lemon. You should do more of these. GO CHLEREK! :)
JayJay chapter 2 . 6/15/2012
You wrote that awesomely, one of the best I've read! :)
dadby chapter 2 . 6/3/2012
This was a wonderful and intense two shot lemon! I love it! C/D FOREVER!
AnnabethJackson chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
You would think with her moving so much she would now the differences between single and double
Fabulous as FCUK chapter 2 . 2/1/2012
interesting
Megpie1993 chapter 2 . 11/19/2011
I loved it.
Atira7 chapter 2 . 10/26/2011
I think you got him perfect :)
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