Reviews for celeripedean
Athyna DaughterofPosiedon chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
Very lovely. Superbly detailed.
Irene Moriarty chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
I absolutely love all of your stories and this is no different. I love love love love it!
chibiaries chapter 1 . 10/4/2010
I love this. I love, love, love this piece.

All the descriptions, the musings, the running, the Doctor's stream of consciousness type stuff, all the delicious 11/Amy hints...it was really beautifully done.

The section with the Dream Lord was terrifying, and almost heartbreaking, and for some reason, the last part with the Collective is so bittersweet and fluffy, it hurts.

But in a good way, of course.
luxmondy chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
Only reason to be anxious about this: too short.

Oh, and how do you plan to improve on it?

Everything here was brilliant, your depiction of the Dreamlord chilling to perfection.
Lafele29 chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
I love this one, my favourite yet! Loved all the running references, and the:

"You can keep running- but can she?"
Whirlwind421 chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
Awesome! I love the Amy/Doctor romance. I like how the Dream Lord tried to tempt the Doctor. Tehe.
Terriah chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
Really liked it, but always enjoy a few more fluffy moments :)

x
Pickles the Great chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
This is really nice. I especially like the wording and thought you put into the characters thoughts. Good job.

Pickles
Waiting for Wow chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
Very enjoyable. I like the way you captured the essence of both Amy and 11 even without a clear plotline. Can't wait to see where you go next.
Amy.E.Pond chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
Your story is perfect, I loved it! Axxx
ShainaNight chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
AMAZING writing, my friend. I enjoyed reading this :)
Jennifer Gale chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
I've been reading fanfiction on ffnet for 6 years, and I've never reviewed a story here, before.

Woman, you're brilliant! I found your "A" story last night, then the "B", and was so happy to see that you'd posted a new story in this cycle. I just finished watching Series 5, and am obsessed with 11 and Amy. And, wow. You do such a fantastic job of capturing the characters. The doctor really sounds like 11, which is quite tricky to do. Also, the level of your prose is quite high. It is a treat to read every word - I usually end up skimming a lot of fanfiction, but did not skim while reading your stories. I'm a writer, and I never feel myself thrown out of the story because of bad pacing, grammar, ooc characters, etc..

Is your heart happy yet? ;)

It's true. The other two stories were tighter, but this story is still extremely good. And, like I said, I haven't reviewed a fic here ever (or elsewhere for several years).

Thank you. Keep writing! I'll be coming back for more. :)

Jennifer Gale