Reviews for Serpent's Bride
HelpmeHermione chapter 5 . 3/5/2020
I hate this Ginny. This is so OOC. The constant hot cold hot is tiring. This is as far as I go. Life is too short.
Guest chapter 16 . 12/25/2019
xElleAndromedax chapter 1 . 1/5/2019
Isn't Blaise Zabini a guy? lol
xElleAndromedax chapter 1 . 1/5/2019
Honestly, I love how your story is going so far. I love how you portray the characters as well. My only concern is with some of the character's names. I'm mean it's fine if you want to create a name for the characters, it's your story so go ahead. But just to let you know, Ginny's first name is Ginevra, not Virginia. It's a common misconception. Also, Draco's grandfather/Lucius' father is Abraxas Malfoy. But great story! I'm loving it so far.
Scenics chapter 16 . 9/23/2018
soory but i find it creepy
Azalea Marie chapter 1 . 8/28/2018
Also, it wasn't known that Blaise was a boy at the time either. Again, check the publish date before wasting your time and everyone else's by posting a dumb "correction".
Azalea Marie chapter 1 . 8/28/2018
Why do people consistently insist on correcting authors of old HP fics about Ginny's full name? Obviously you weren't around when HP fan fiction was at its height way back when this story was published. We didn't know her name was GINEVRA back then, it was assumed that it was VIRGINIA until JKR confirmed otherwise AFTER the fourth book had been released. Check when the story was published before correcting an author, it just makes you look like a noob.
Guest chapter 16 . 2/15/2018
Now that was Fangirl nonsense. If there ever was a story that could be called such, it is this piece of shit
R chapter 16 . 8/2/2017
The ending (last few chapters) too complicated and not fun. You could have kept it simpler with the plot just involving heirlooms and destined to me together or something. Otherwise, ignoring the last few chapters, it's was very well written.
Alien Zina chapter 5 . 7/26/2017
This Draco is constantly kissing her without her permission. At first she is surprised/angry, and then she is turned on. She has no backbone and is far too ok with being constantly sexually assaulted.
Alien Zina chapter 3 . 7/26/2017
Heyo! Just a heads up that "unconscious" is being passed-out and "subconscious" is the layer of consciousness that you're not always aware of.
Marisa Boza chapter 3 . 2/23/2017
sadly i can't bear reading anymore. this fic is just littered with so many mistakes that it isn't fun to read. also the Virginia thing is getting on my nerves. would like to see this betaed by someone maybe then it's worth a read.
Tinshaw chapter 5 . 1/17/2017
Why is this chapter blacked out?
DazedAlice420 chapter 3 . 11/27/2016
loved this story. it took me on an emotional rollercoaster ride and was definitely NOT boring .
KashIsle chapter 16 . 10/10/2016
Great story! Can't believe it was written so long ago. You had such character insight even after just four books. Thank you for writing this fic. It'd be so wonderful to see something new from you especially a DG fic.
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