Reviews for Serpent's Bride
Iris chapter 1 . 10/4/2022
On the line where Draco says 'Gotcha' Weasley is spelt worng
Yong Soo Kim chapter 16 . 3/7/2022
awww I really like this story, I really enjoy it
Guest chapter 7 . 11/2/2021
Realmente gostei dessa mistura
Parabéns por isso nem sempre é fácil de fazer
Kariel13 chapter 1 . 3/12/2021
I can’t get passed you not knowing how to spell WEASLEY. For Heavens sake, if you’re going to write a fic, learn to at least spell their names.
HelpmeHermione chapter 5 . 3/5/2020
I hate this Ginny. This is so OOC. The constant hot cold hot is tiring. This is as far as I go. Life is too short.
Guest chapter 16 . 12/25/2019
xElleAndromedax chapter 1 . 1/5/2019
Isn't Blaise Zabini a guy? lol
xElleAndromedax chapter 1 . 1/5/2019
Honestly, I love how your story is going so far. I love how you portray the characters as well. My only concern is with some of the character's names. I'm mean it's fine if you want to create a name for the characters, it's your story so go ahead. But just to let you know, Ginny's first name is Ginevra, not Virginia. It's a common misconception. Also, Draco's grandfather/Lucius' father is Abraxas Malfoy. But great story! I'm loving it so far.
Scenics chapter 16 . 9/23/2018
soory but i find it creepy
Azalea Marie chapter 1 . 8/28/2018
Also, it wasn't known that Blaise was a boy at the time either. Again, check the publish date before wasting your time and everyone else's by posting a dumb "correction".
Azalea Marie chapter 1 . 8/28/2018
Why do people consistently insist on correcting authors of old HP fics about Ginny's full name? Obviously you weren't around when HP fan fiction was at its height way back when this story was published. We didn't know her name was GINEVRA back then, it was assumed that it was VIRGINIA until JKR confirmed otherwise AFTER the fourth book had been released. Check when the story was published before correcting an author, it just makes you look like a noob.
Guest chapter 16 . 2/15/2018
Now that was Fangirl nonsense. If there ever was a story that could be called such, it is this piece of shit
R chapter 16 . 8/2/2017
The ending (last few chapters) too complicated and not fun. You could have kept it simpler with the plot just involving heirlooms and destined to me together or something. Otherwise, ignoring the last few chapters, it's was very well written.
Alien Zina chapter 5 . 7/26/2017
This Draco is constantly kissing her without her permission. At first she is surprised/angry, and then she is turned on. She has no backbone and is far too ok with being constantly sexually assaulted.
Alien Zina chapter 3 . 7/26/2017
Heyo! Just a heads up that "unconscious" is being passed-out and "subconscious" is the layer of consciousness that you're not always aware of.
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