I was going to read this but it's spelled Weasley. Not gonna bother

On the line where Draco says 'Gotcha' Weasley is spelt worng

awww I really like this story, I really enjoy it

Realmente gostei dessa mistura
Parabéns por isso nem sempre é fácil de fazer

I can’t get passed you not knowing how to spell WEASLEY. For Heavens sake, if you’re going to write a fic, learn to at least spell their names.

I hate this Ginny. This is so OOC. The constant hot cold hot is tiring. This is as far as I go. Life is too short.

Amazing

Isn't Blaise Zabini a guy? lol

Honestly, I love how your story is going so far. I love how you portray the characters as well. My only concern is with some of the character's names. I'm mean it's fine if you want to create a name for the characters, it's your story so go ahead. But just to let you know, Ginny's first name is Ginevra, not Virginia. It's a common misconception. Also, Draco's grandfather/Lucius' father is Abraxas Malfoy. But great story! I'm loving it so far.

soory but i find it creepy

Also, it wasn't known that Blaise was a boy at the time either. Again, check the publish date before wasting your time and everyone else's by posting a dumb "correction".

Why do people consistently insist on correcting authors of old HP fics about Ginny's full name? Obviously you weren't around when HP fan fiction was at its height way back when this story was published. We didn't know her name was GINEVRA back then, it was assumed that it was VIRGINIA until JKR confirmed otherwise AFTER the fourth book had been released. Check when the story was published before correcting an author, it just makes you look like a noob.

Now that was Fangirl nonsense. If there ever was a story that could be called such, it is this piece of shit

The ending (last few chapters) too complicated and not fun. You could have kept it simpler with the plot just involving heirlooms and destined to me together or something. Otherwise, ignoring the last few chapters, it's was very well written.

This Draco is constantly kissing her without her permission. At first she is surprised/angry, and then she is turned on. She has no backbone and is far too ok with being constantly sexually assaulted.