Reviews for The Whole World in his Throat
x.-kTa-.x chapter 1 . 1/23
beautiful, and sad
Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
So good and so sad. Great job.
songstar13 chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
Oh my goodness that's beautiful. You have such a way with words and I love every single last one that you've used in this piece. So so much. I will always be a Doctor/Rose shipper, and yes that extends to Eleven and any other doctors who may come after him. Thank you so very much for writing this beautiful piece.
FlyingLovegood123 chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
I liked this. Good job-there were few mistakes!
ReprobaVir chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
This was amazing. A truly excellent look at the Rose/Doctor dynamic that will always persist through the series. How he's one man, always the same man filled with different worlds and cultures and wonders, but she's the same really. A match.

He exploring of the new him was spectacular, and Amy's profound understanding of it all, the sorrow and happiness, was brilliant.

I'd love seeing more along these lines from you. Please keep writing.
SD chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
There is so much that is absolutely awesome about this story. I've been reading a lot of 11/Rose fics recently, just out of curiosty, and I think this is the best I've seen.

11/Rose is difficult, I think, because it seems that the parts of the Doctor that fit so well with Rose seem to be missing from 11 as we've seen him on screen. So trying to keep both of them 100% in character and still have the chemistry we know and love so well is problematic. You've managed to solve that problem.

Having Rose recognize what was different, and then having him unlock that part of himself that he'd been suppressing... brilliant.

Fave line: "Something shifts behind his eyes then, something he's been holding back. And he's not just him, he's all of him, all the ways he's ever been." I can picture it happening, and it's fantastic!
sweetestmisery19 chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
This story was just brilliant! I normally don't like Rose with Eleven, but this was just so well-written that I couldn't help but love it. Excellent, excellent work! :)
Daydreaming-with-ink chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
What a profoundly odd, sad and just plain...other...sort of story. The writing style was really interesting, and the end line just made me so sad. Poor Rose, poor Doc.
lauraxtennant chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
I am completely, completely in awe of this. Challenging and brilliant and heartbreaking and compelling and absolutely ABSOLUTELY what happened :) You put The Moff to shame. Brilliant solution, that shag her senseless thing, especially with the way he suggested it ;D The way Rose was touching him, discovering him and how he wasn't quite right made me smile. It captured those two, and their love for each other, even as time has gone by without them being together, in such a very real way, this story. Well done!

A lump in my throat throughout, and as for the last line...well, I think you succeeded in making me let out a real-life, physical, out-loud sob. In fact, I know you did.

Generally, series 5 was a bit hit and miss for me. I think that Matt Smith is great, but lots of me still aches for the good ol' Rose and Nine or Ten happy happy banter (i.e, series 1 and 2, before everything very, very sad and angsty) But anyway, what i wanted to say was, I'm fascinated with Eleven/Rose fics. This is by far the best, most realistic and in character 11 story I've read. You are a fantastic writer. Thankyou for sharing. Even if my heart is now aching with sadness for that man... (how is it that these two fictional characters have made me so emotionally attached to them? Their love is so powerful, I'm so sad that he loses her every time. It consoles me, a little, to know that at least she still has him.) Anyway, well done, and thankyou :) Keep writing x
Absentia chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
I'm afraid I've nothing pertinent to say, other than that I enjoyed this (and perhaps a rant at how annoying I found it that I rather liked series 5, except in the way they sort of sat with their hands over their eyes and pretended the last four years and everyone in them hadn't happened, except when they decided something was relevant to the now, so it's nice to see more than scavenged bits integrated here), but I would hate you to think I was insulting you, so here is my review, seeing as how I already faved it.
Secret Agent Smut Girl chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
Just lovely. This is very nearly prose, I adore it.
Adieu FanFic xxx chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
God, this was . . . Brilliant? Insane? Elliptical? Nonsensical? Amazing?

What a challenging piece of writing. And I had the pleasure of seeing if I could swallow it all before breakfast!

The mercurial shifts between viewpoints and the present tense and the definition of characters and the sparse verbal interactions and the miasma of meaning unsaid in the iternal dialogues . . . GAH! Challenging, amazing, fabulous!

Such a rewarding piece. It felt hard to keep in my mouth as I ate throught it; I had to keep masticating and gulping it down in chunks but the sense of satisfaction in my tummy as I licked the plate clean is a pleasure I am glad I didn't pass up.

Butterflies Not Meant to Survive, Fish That Are Meant to, Squashy Faces That Don't Quite Fit, Two Many Companions, Cracks Through Which Doctors Can Climb, Universe-Saving Shags . . . . I lurve the way your Muse speaks to you, Nyah.

You did impossibly well on this one *-*
DyranHunter chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
Oh this was great! I love the idea of "fixing the cracks" ... although . he should take her back instead of fixing them that way.

hmmm ... plots within plots in my brain .

Thanks :D
Mirder Mystery chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
That's amazing! I love your solution to the cracks, that was really clever. I've always wondered what would happen if Rose met Eleven. I think you did a really good job portraying that. :)
Heart Inside of Me chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
I have my sad face on. I always feel so sad for the Doctor. The happily ever after girl in me wants him so badly to be able to find someone that he could actually love. Okay, sorry, didn't mean to get all melancholy on you. I like Rose's slow acceptance of Eleven. It was really, really fun to see Rose back and with Eleven. Thank-you for sharing.