Reviews for Promise
A Dozen Lemmings chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
I honestly did not see the sex coming until it was about done. Excellently done.
Alexxis T. Swan chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
I loved it. I loved all the tiny bits and pieces that make him Lelouch and her Kallen. How he acknowledges the fact that he really wasn't the cause of her greatness, that it's been in her all along, that she is one of the best pilots in the world on her own merit. How she can see the difference between last time and this time. The way she addresses him as Zero when she needs him to be serious and Lelouch when she just wants to know the truth. How I could feel the danger and excitement of the possibility of being caught; it gave this story an undertone of urgency.

Lol he actually said queen out loud and she didn't react to that. I think that's the one thing I'd change about this oneshot if I could.

"Lelou-" "Shh" Even when he shushes her, he's completing his own name. I wonder if that was on purpose.

I absolutely died at the brilliant use of paradox at the conclusion of this masterpiece. Stunning ending may I say.

I think very few people truly mattered to Lelouch. Her sister duh. His mother until he found her. CC for all she's done for him. Kallen for being a constant support from the very start. Milly vaguely for the joy she's given to others. Shirley for being his friend and loving him despite having a reason to hate him. Suzaku his greatest foe and dearest friend. I've never been able to understand the relationship between Rolo and Lelouch when it came to that last scene where Rolo died so I'm not sure about Rolo.

Don't you think its funny how the student council ending up being so important when it came to the fate of the world? I mean they're just supposed to be in high school without any serious worries and yet Nina invents a new type of nuke, Milly almost marries an Earl, Suzaku become a Knight/pilots Lancelot, Lelouch moonlights as Zero, Kallen's the secret ace of the Black Knights, and Nunally's a princess who goes on to become Viceroy. Rivalz is the only one who didn't transcend I guess. I personally loved how those festival episodes made them all happy even if just for a short time.

Anyways, enough of my babbling, thanks for writing such a wonderful piece. I like how you focused on the emotions rather than the act. I a little lazy to write a review the first time I read this, the fact that it was in the early hours of morning might have had something to do with it but I couldn't commit the injustice of not giving this a review. A good fic deserves appreciation and its author deserve due praise.

Yours sincerely,

Alexxis T. Swan
ficklejam chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
I can't believe I didn't left a review for this~~! This was a masterpiece!
blackkitty27 chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
nice keepin them in character
Timber Lou chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
Great story. True to the characters; unlike a lot of Code Geass fic. And with some actual sex, worthy of it's M rating. So many make L a weakling in the bedroom. I honestly don't see why most don't have him as a total bed hopper. I mean, sure, he's 16, but he's precocious. And it wasn't like the anime didn't drop enough hints. Anyway, great story. Will have to look up some of the rest of your fic. Would love to read something longer you've done.
the eyesore chapter 1 . 12/25/2010
Beautiful and one of the best rated M's... I love it! *adds to favorites* This was great! I love how you wrote it, especially your descriptions...the portrayal as well.

Great work!
A chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
Waah! This story reminded me of the ending of R2... The last few sentences nearly made me cry... This is great, keep it up! And no, not just for the XXX...
Alastor999 chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
That has to be one of the most tasteful lemons I've ever read. No lewd descriptions or foul language like "fuck me!" that's so stereotypical of a porno that's become nauseating to read and hear. You've very beautifully conveyed their feelings and portrayed two people making love, instead of confusing it with simple humping and groaning other much less talented writers incorrectly label as "making love".
EminaKotek-nightmare chapter 1 . 9/18/2010
very beautiful. I love it
Leeko chapter 1 . 9/6/2010
That was a very good lemon. I liked certain descriptions like how his gloved hand felt like winter, that was really good.
thepinkmartini chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
LOVED IT.
Artemis-Ikana chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
kudos... kudos... kudos to you!

bravo... great job...

you put together a smut(ish) story yet retained at least the semblance of a plot
kyuubi's apprentice chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
Beautiful. Simply Beautiful. b(.')d
ryder77 chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
It's amazing how you managed to use imagery to achieve sensuality without being explicit. I especially liked that you focused on the emotions involved, too, and not just the act.
consur-gence chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
I find this simply beautiful...Keep writing!