Reviews for Water for Life
Outlawry chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
Oh Gale... I could cry for him. I really could.
RipredtheGnawer chapter 1 . 12/8/2010
Well, this was absolutely great. Just one thing -

you said this:

She lays there and waits for it to be clean.

Not even caring if she is unseen.

generally, it makes sense, except you present it as if Katniss DOES want to be seen. Which I'm assuming she doesn't, since these are the Games. So maybe this?

She lays there and waits for it to be clean.

Not even caring that she can be seen.

or you could say "could be seen"

just a tip!
LoveTheBoyWithTheBread chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
Very interesting. The rhyming threw off the emotion, it sounded a little too...trying, I think is the word I want. Also, there were some structural errors. But all in all, it was pretty good.

-Mel
Sapphire Wych chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
Oh my gosh! That is soo sweet. I absolutely love Gale!
arrlow chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
such a beautiful poem! It gave me shivers :)