|Reviews for Naruto: The Winter Fox|
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/30
Write more please! need more
| doubledamn chapter 3 . 10/1/2014
I get that the Council's a great 'bad guy' image, but why does EVERYONE let them walk all over the Hokage? They are an ADVISORY BOARD ONLY. They have NO legal power over the village decisions and they were only formed to take a little load off the Hokage's position.
| Publicola chapter 3 . 5/17/2014
Fun story so far, but I gotta say Naruto's new kekkai genkai is severely over-full. I don't say it's overpowered, especially compared to what Kishimoto made of the Sharingan, but there's just too much unrelated elements.
When you rewrite this, I'd recommend restricting it to the following:
Body: his body is more resistant to the cold
Chakra: he now is able to mix Water and Wind chakra to make Ice, like Haku's bloodline
Eyes: his eyes are now able to track heat signatures, even where normal vision doesn't work
Basically, this list would restrict the kekkai genkai purely to ice-related changes, like an improved version of the Yuki clan. Now, you could keep some of the other changes (like the Kyuubi making his body more able to channel demonic chakra), but those would be body manipulation resulting from his status as a jinchuuriki, not a kekkai genkai that could be inherited by Naruto's future children.
I'd also recommend getting rid of the 'demon claws' as unnecessary, and the 'primal aura' as being way too cliched a set-up for a harem fic. I don't mind Naruto/Multi pairings, but I prefer to work with a limited number of relationships and avoid the use of involuntary aphrodisiacs.
All that said, I've greatly enjoyed your other stories I've read so far, and I'm greatly enjoying this story as well.
| Czar Joseph chapter 4 . 3/31/2014
Please don't delete!
| Dracoessa chapter 5 . 9/21/2013
Dang it, it was getting good :p
| Dracoessa chapter 4 . 9/21/2013
Toldya. I hope that Naruto can thaw out some of those hearts.
| Dracoessa chapter 3 . 9/21/2013
Having a feeling that the duce is going to hit the fans in that meeting, and I like this version.
| VanitasTheFool.1 chapter 5 . 8/8/2013
ok well i will wait for that because your storys rules
| Wolfone10 chapter 2 . 6/21/2013
If you don't want to teach "Mr. Arrogant", well accidents happen ALL THE TIME on missions, it's just part of the shiniobi life style ne? Even if the council is pissed after, TOO bad HE'S DEAD!
| xsanoxx chapter 5 . 6/15/2013
fuck man this was getting awesome i hope you can start the rewrite soon this story is getting very good :D
| Kittens Kat chapter 5 . 6/2/2013
I HOPE YOUR MUSE TREATS YOU WELL AND THAT SHE GETS INSPIRED SOON BECAUSE THEY ARE REALLY GOOD STORIES! THANK YOU!
| jesus Rubio chapter 5 . 5/8/2013
Hey dont just add it on when he get older cause this story is getting good
| King of Epic Chaos chapter 5 . 2/12/2013
I know I have heard "THIS I SWEAR" from somewhere but where I wonder
| King of Epic Chaos chapter 4 . 2/12/2013
a little boring if I say so myself
| King of Epic Chaos chapter 3 . 2/12/2013
now that is what you call totally KICK-ASS