Reviews for If I Only Had
Deanadelyon chapter 4 . 4/17/2011
A very, very cool concept, and carried out quite well :) Personally, I might have switched "heart" and "nerve"- Remus and Peter respectively, with heavy, self-depricating irony on Remus's part. But really, you did very, very well, and the idea really is fantastic.

Great job. :)
StarKid McFly chapter 4 . 1/24/2011
I really enjoyed this, though I felt sad for Sirius and to some extent Peter :(

You conveyed the meaning really well and I loved the way you used the wizard of oz idea, it worked really well!

Thanks so much for writing this :D


Love Stained Sleeves chapter 4 . 8/4/2010
That was really unique. :)

You captured the characters really well, and I loved it.
libraryloser chapter 4 . 8/4/2010
You have all the characters down so well!
Xiaoling chapter 2 . 8/4/2010
Sirius is the younger one I think.
Scision chapter 3 . 7/22/2010
hmm i've always wondered how wormtail became involved with voldemort and everything... the coward D;

nicely written :3
Scision chapter 2 . 7/22/2010
always loved fics with sirius moping (well, there are better words) about his home and family, or lack thereof. makes me feel so bad for him though, heh. i like his mom's command of them taking a shower when they got home hahaha!
Violet Scarlet Lily chapter 3 . 7/10/2010
! Sorry I had to get that out. I loved the part about the animagus forms.
Jewels5 chapter 3 . 7/8/2010
Ignore nit-picky reviews-this is really good!

I love the concept, and I love that you did Peter for "heart" rather than "courage," which was rather what I expected. Can't wait to see what you do with Remus and courage.

My favorite is Sirius's. The ending was really well done, and I just enjoyed his introspection. Lovely work.

Hope you update soon! Happy writing D


Violet Scarlet Lily chapter 2 . 7/8/2010
Oh, that was really sad. But I have two things to point out: One, his name is Regulus, not Regalus. Two, Mrs. Black could have taken them by side-along apparition, because Dumbledore transports Harry that way before he's seventeen. But other than that, this is a really good story. I especially like how you twist the "There's no place like home" to mean something totally different.
Gika Black chapter 2 . 7/4/2010

needing a home is so Sirius... poor thing...

really good chapter!

are you going to write only those four chapters or are you going to write more?

wainting for the heart one!
names are overrated chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
Love this! Great idea, and I can't wait to read the other three!
Violet Scarlet Lily chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
that is HILARIOUS! love it...
Gika Black chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
Love the chapter!

was trying to figure out which marauder don't have what...

and I was right for the first one!

soo, when do I found out the others?

wainting for more!
Scision chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
nicely written :) very fitting for James, too... smart but not really too smart in other aspects. i look forward to the rest of your mini series...