|Reviews for If I Only Had|
| Deanadelyon chapter 4 . 4/17/2011
A very, very cool concept, and carried out quite well :) Personally, I might have switched "heart" and "nerve"- Remus and Peter respectively, with heavy, self-depricating irony on Remus's part. But really, you did very, very well, and the idea really is fantastic.
Great job. :)
| StarKid McFly chapter 4 . 1/24/2011
I really enjoyed this, though I felt sad for Sirius and to some extent Peter :(
You conveyed the meaning really well and I loved the way you used the wizard of oz idea, it worked really well!
Thanks so much for writing this :D
| Love Stained Sleeves chapter 4 . 8/4/2010
That was really unique. :)
You captured the characters really well, and I loved it.
| libraryloser chapter 4 . 8/4/2010
You have all the characters down so well!
| Xiaoling chapter 2 . 8/4/2010
Sirius is the younger one I think.
| Scision chapter 3 . 7/22/2010
hmm i've always wondered how wormtail became involved with voldemort and everything... the coward D;
nicely written :3
| Scision chapter 2 . 7/22/2010
always loved fics with sirius moping (well, there are better words) about his home and family, or lack thereof. makes me feel so bad for him though, heh. i like his mom's command of them taking a shower when they got home hahaha!
| Violet Scarlet Lily chapter 3 . 7/10/2010
! Sorry I had to get that out. I loved the part about the animagus forms.
| Jewels5 chapter 3 . 7/8/2010
Ignore nit-picky reviews-this is really good!
I love the concept, and I love that you did Peter for "heart" rather than "courage," which was rather what I expected. Can't wait to see what you do with Remus and courage.
My favorite is Sirius's. The ending was really well done, and I just enjoyed his introspection. Lovely work.
Hope you update soon! Happy writing D
| Violet Scarlet Lily chapter 2 . 7/8/2010
Oh, that was really sad. But I have two things to point out: One, his name is Regulus, not Regalus. Two, Mrs. Black could have taken them by side-along apparition, because Dumbledore transports Harry that way before he's seventeen. But other than that, this is a really good story. I especially like how you twist the "There's no place like home" to mean something totally different.
| Gika Black chapter 2 . 7/4/2010
needing a home is so Sirius... poor thing...
really good chapter!
are you going to write only those four chapters or are you going to write more?
wainting for the heart one!
| names are overrated chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
Love this! Great idea, and I can't wait to read the other three!
| Violet Scarlet Lily chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
that is HILARIOUS! love it...
| Gika Black chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
Love the chapter!
was trying to figure out which marauder don't have what...
and I was right for the first one!
soo, when do I found out the others?
wainting for more!
| Scision chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
nicely written :) very fitting for James, too... smart but not really too smart in other aspects. i look forward to the rest of your mini series...