|Reviews for Coffee|
| Romaxnana chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
oh my...as much as i cant stand Vidic, and i think hes like some uber creeper.
I liked this.
It was adorable to say the least.
| ilikebirdies chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
I like that the main focus is Vidic, to start, because I hardly see any thing with Vidic being the top man in the story. Be it a short oneshot or not, I can admire you for that.
Uuh the only critique I have is one or two typos, not much, and word repetition. I have a knack and an infamy for finding word repetition and yours was "stepping." You could've replaced it with "walked," "strolled," "began to," "edged," and so on. Stepping wasn't necessary over and again.
The style's not memorable, but the story itself is, so that's good.
Nice one! It's very satisfying. :)