Reviews for Plowed
The Great Susinko chapter 5 . 2/10/2014
Great chapter! I was surprised about how well Cloud took the news about Squall and their son. I would have been a bit more angry, but it was sweet reunion. I'm surprised that Sephiroth has been so quiet. Maybe he found some other poor soul to hurt. I can understand why Squall was upset that Cloud had gone through his things. I love how you made Squall pregnant again. It's Cloud's...right?
The Great Susinko chapter 4 . 2/9/2014
This what a huge chapter! I love it but I don't know where to begin. I'm saddened that Squall kept the fact that Cloud's a father from him for five years. There is no excuse for that. At all. The romance between Irvine and Squall was sweet, but I've always been a more of a Seifer/Squall kind of girl. Sephiroth really is crazy in this fic. I can see him manipulating people like he does. I'm saddened that Kadaj is such a jerk in all areas of his life. I really love this story and I am off to the next chapter!
The Great Susinko chapter 3 . 2/8/2014
This was a really good really long chapter. I am very saddened that Squall never even gave Cloud a chance to react. He just ran away with their son. If I was Cloud, I would be more than pissed. Way more. I am also sad that Squall fallen so far. It isn't easy being a single mother...father...mother-father. With little education, that is the fate for many like him. He may not feel it now, but having sex with many random people WILL damage your heart.

OH! I'm also glad you added the triplets! I love Kadaj! I love the other two as well, but I'm so happy to read about Kadaj. Sephiroth is really a horrible parent.
The Great Susinko chapter 2 . 2/6/2014
I am very glad that you not only had Zack make up with Cloud but you also had Zack get caring help from his father. Zack may feel as if the whole Sephiroth thing was his fault but Sephiroth is the adult. He is the one at fault. Especially since he actually went to Zack's house after him.

I love the explanation as to why Squall can get pregnant. It was well thought out. Who knows what the military did to poor Laguna. I really hope Squall tells Cloud before he has the baby. Let him adjust before the big shock. I know it's hard to tell the father about an unexpected pregnancy. I was married at the time but my husband was in collage and it was NOT the best of times. It was rough but it was worth it. Anyway, on to the next chapter!
The Great Susinko chapter 1 . 2/6/2014
I can't say I'm thrilled that Zack cheated on Cloud with Sephiroth OR that Cloud cheated on Zack with Squall. This has NOTHING to do with your writing or the quality of your story. Your writing style is excellent and this story is well written and interesting. It just saddens me to see things turn out that way. Which is good. This is YOUR world and it shouldn't exist how I would want it. That's what makes fiction so fun to read. You never know what will happen next. But I do love Zack. And Cloud. And Squall. And Lea. I could go on, but I'll stop now! I hate people being sad.
likkle cloud chapter 9 . 5/11/2013
i honestly say I like this story so far, but I just soooooooo soooooo hope that things work out for the best for cloud and leon, I would be gutted if it didn't after all they've gone through!

Please get the fic up and running again soon! :)
heartless241 chapter 3 . 3/20/2013
omg! I never thought leon would stoop so low as to see his wonderful body 0o0"
heartless241 chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
OMG did that really happen poor Cloud being used as a cover up
Mel'n'Kier chapter 6 . 3/9/2013
Why? Whyyyyyy there be angst!?
xOwleX chapter 9 . 1/23/2012
omg...f*ck Leon! ug! i read this story in school (and last night) and i literally was screaming at lunch i was so pissed off at him! in my opinion he doesn't even deserve Cloud anymore. He wouldn't have kissed Irvine back if he was really in love with Cloud!

Cloud just needs to take Denzel, Sora and Roxas somewhere else and never speak to Leon again. Denzel and Leon can write letters to each other or something, I don't care, but he is pissing me the f*ck off! Gosh i was so pissed at this story(Leon's fault!) but i LOVE IT SOOOOOOO MUCHHH! Its all the angst that gets me angry! XD (its a major compliment, normally i don't ever get worked up about fanfictions, hardly any.) but oh my word...Leon just...he F-ed up pretty freaken bad. I don't think Cloud will let him come back so easily. and i must say, I was extremely disappointed that Irvine didn't get to see Cissnei's birth. I mean it IS his kid. just because Cloud missed out on his doesn't mean that Irvine should suffer too! poor guy, i feel sooooo sorry for him! (holy cow i've never written a review this long before. o.o and i normally don't leave reviews to begin with!) but seriously...i drained all of my phones battery reading this fanfiction! it got me so worked up! XD and I love your writing style and the use of variety in your sentence structure! I just think Leon should be with Irvine and Cissnei and be miserable for the rest of his life...just saying! (I love Leon too, like...I'm naming my kid after him thats how much I love him) but he's f-ed up so many times its probably going to take a while for Cloud to ever if at all regain his trust! but I'm such a sucker for happy endings! (major cheese ball alert...*points to me*) so i'm extremely excited about how this story will turn out! PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOONNNNNNN! DXXXX i'm like, in love with this story! (even if i get pissed at Leon...i'm just emotional I guess.) XD
StillDollDemon chapter 9 . 1/22/2012
haha XD i will vote on the poll!

and yeah,you sended this too me!

wow,i must say:i'm happy Roxy didn't get raped!you told me you wanted him to feel broken and stuff so i got kinda worried when i readed the stuff at the beginning.

Aaaw nuuu!Roxy y no virgin anymore D:

poor Sora, now he's the character i pity the most. Not even his brother(s) came to his show,his best friend was busy shoving his tongue down his girlfriends throat :/


i don't know much about him,he he *sweatdrop* but now i know that he would be nice enough to help a stranger :D

Keep up the gooood work!


damn,now i need to draw something for this,don't i,mate?

XD i will and i shall draw!
VampyricDemonHobo chapter 4 . 1/21/2012
I find it ironic that i was listening to the Black Veil Brides new cover of 'Rebel Yell' when Irvine was singing the billy idol version on karaoke XD I love this story, its great :)

~Pyric :D
heyheyheyhollywood chapter 9 . 1/19/2012
SlayerNinja13 chapter 9 . 1/19/2012
U write a awesome story I love it soo much I can't wait till the next chp. Update soo:)
Guest chapter 8 . 12/19/2011
ok i really like ur story its one of the best i have read in a while. i lovd how everything in this story has work out so far and ur right it kinda has reminded me of a soap. i hope u update really soon cuz i am really going to be going crazy waiting
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