Reviews for Jacob's Birthday Present
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 1 . 11/16/2011
That was fun. I do have to say that Bella's current condition threw me off as well as Jake's age (I wasn't expecting him to be in his 20s).

Great job!
beckaboo924 chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
That was a nice read after billy's death thx
girlygirl156 chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
love it really good story
sdeeeee chapter 1 . 10/25/2010
LOOOOOOOOOved it! Need I say more!

*fans herself*

Love you for this! Cheers!


NUNICHAN chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
This was hot! I liked Dom Bella, and the fact that it was written in Jacob's POV really help understand that fact. Nice piece. It made me curious and got me interested in reading the fic this belongs to. Good work.
Zayide chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
I gotta say that it was a hot outtake...I am copying and saving the story so when I have it all I can send it overseas to one of my old college friends stationed in Iran...she will definitelly enjoy this story fully...outtakes and all...
dkgors chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
Very hot! :) I loved the blindfold. Happy birthday indeed! :)
mittap chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
Nicely done. Jake is sooo HOT!
bmthespian chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
Great outtake
Trisha Whitlock chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
wish i was bella in the instance. i would have loved it! ;)
no entiendo nada chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
that was hot! the happy birthday cracked me up xD i wish they actually had sex though! you could write a continuation :D
valelf chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
That was so hot! I really need to read more of the Kangaroo!
Chelstiel Winchester chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
Haha I Love Reviews, Too :) Your Story Was Awesome! :) It's Not Too Often It's Written In he Guy's Point Of View, Either - Great Job I Liked The Change In Perspective. :)
connolrebecca chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
That was great - happy birthday Jake :)
Kyashii chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
Awesome! Sooo hot and steamy~ a wonderful birthday present ;D your writing rocks!
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