|Reviews for John and Delenn in Moments in Transition|
| Starscape91 chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
| BFS chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
It's like reading a damn good sci fi novel.
| NHPW chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
The beginning sent tingles down my spine. Ominous beginnings always draw me in! The story itself was great too, and a good plotline to pick up on... I'd forgotten about Shakiri, so I had to think for a moment, but that's right, we never did find out what happened to him. And I LOVE the ending. Nothing says "happily ever after" like a tasteful J&D love scene ;).
| Nyt Yanse chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
This is a very good story- I'm impressed by the way you wound up the Shakiri thread, they never did cover the rest of his story in the series, and this is very likely.
You have a real knack for nailing the details in these pieces of yours, and you're wonderfully prolific. If only my writer's block would disappear so I could follow your example!