Reviews for The Fourth of July Picnic
Vadercat chapter 1 . 3/21/2019
Spoil sport. I think healthy games between colleagues are a good thing as long as heated discussions don't turn into grudge matches that linger...
bjq chapter 1 . 2/4/2016
VG LittleBear chapter 1 . 2/14/2014
Hi, your last sentence cracked me up! Gibbs would just do it too! Abby can get pretty jalous at first sight ... good characterization. Ziva in the national colors looking hot ... would she really dress like that? Well, it's fun!
Thanks and cheers!
Tacpebs chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
Boo Gibbs! Lol. That was a fun read.
Yabbit chapter 1 . 11/12/2011

Long Live BRUCAS chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
Glad all is well between Tony and Tim. At first i was mad that Tim did it on purpose. But then I saw that Tony knew it was an accident and all was forgiven.

So nice that Gibbs was so worried about Tony.

Love Gibbs last comment that they were working next year so something like this can happen again.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
like the end

And all turned out well Tim and Tony are ok.

And Tony caled it an accident was very big of him.
Dixie Dewdrop chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
I love the way you write Tony. Your stories are so good.
Madances chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
Hi, Just read your story. Very good. Tracy
sterno chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
Hieiko chapter 1 . 9/26/2010
Aww! I love this family. And I enjoyed this story, especially the little bits of jealousy expressed by Abby over Tim's date, and Tony over Ziva's date.
Net Sparrow chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
So many good ideas in a relatively short story: The jealousy of Abby and Tony comparing the dates, Gibbs amusement, the competition between Tiny and Tim, a little Tony-whump is always fine, Tim feeling guilty and Tony being generously amicably to his friend/competitor, and Gibbs end-statement was so in character !

Yeah, yeah, yeah - official statement: I loooooove this story !
Lil-Miss-DiNozzo78 chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
Tis be Fyre I was sent here by Mona. Love the fic, not liking Ziva with someone else, but that's just me. I am picky as to who ZIva can and cannot date. In other words I am a huge Tiva fan LOL.

Anyways cute and great fic. I liked the small banters between McGee and Tony and the friendship. Again great fic girly.
pandi19 chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
LOL! Mc-Uncle Sam! That's a great McName for McGee!

This one shot is perfect - a good mix of humor & H/C. :) You really captured McGee's internal thoughts on this.

Great story! As always, I loved it! Eager to see what you post next!
vanishingp2000 chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
This is fun, trust Tony to get into trouble even at a picnic :-). Thanks as always, VP.
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