|Reviews for My Everything|
| Starlit Skyline chapter 1 . 4/9/2015
This was beautiful. Just wanted to point out, though, that you misspelled "quite" and wrote "quiet" in Liam's POV, second and the paragraph before the end. Beside that, it's perfect. Adding to C2.
| Hikari no Suzaku chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
Break was whipped back before it was cool. And I mean in EVERY way X3
| Miki Phantomhive chapter 1 . 8/16/2013
This all happened...I guess...I have indeed became a strong woman...Oh Break...you are...my Everything
((I LOVE YOUR STORY! d(_)b I wish they would have shown this part in the manga TTTT))
| xXxWolvesInTheNightxXx chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
OMG! I wished this happened! :)
| FlyingChange chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
I loved this part in the manga and you made it ten times better! I love it! Awesome job!
| EssGee chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
So technically, Break isn't completely blind as far as we know. He did say he could discern shapes if placed in front of him and so-on, so him "seeing" or "watching" certain things is plausible; but the level of detail you had him observe was.. Her eyelashes? Or subtle expressions? Aside from inaccuracy, they really detracted from the feel of the moment, even, at least in my opinion.
Once the canon parts stopped, too, it seemed a bit.. rushed, I suppose. :3 You might try an update sometime, fleshing that out and building a little more suspense before the kiss to bring the emotional level up to par with the rest of the fic?
Aside from those details, of course, it's a great concept and a nice fic. Keep it up.
| creepysaru chapter 1 . 9/18/2010
Soo beautiful ( - v-)
Oh god! this is one of the most cute fanfics I had read (points for being a Break x Sharon my favourite couple)
The way you write it was marvelous!
The time you spend on it was worthy really.
See ya and good luck!
Keep writing you're great!
| Aline chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
so cute fic, I love them together...
and I think this chapter is one of the custest moment of them and it can by a hint that they could be together
| animeprincess32 chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
This is just perfect~!
I love this couple very much and this is one of my favourite scenes from the manga!
| Litschi chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
Great! Very very Awsome! _
Great Story, love it alot!
But uhm it would be also really good, if she didn't like him the wy he likes her! _
Such drama would be Great too
| mangacrazi chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
Beautifully written~ Everything flows so well. This pairing is the best and you have just proven that through this wonderful story. Awesome job, and thanks for sharing! -
| talkstoangels77 chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
Absolutely love this...But where did you ever find chapter 49?
| Pineapple Lump chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
_ i like it!
i think the quote at the start was a good way to set it up
and i like the ending too
| KyoxSakiFan chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
This was very enjoyable. It captures the emotion in that chapter very well( ah yes, I remember while I was reading that chapter, my heart kept swelling with angst for Break, who I just love so dearly).
The only mistake I can really find is that quite a few times, you describe Break seeing Sharon, when he can't, which makes it confusing. XD But I think we all make that mistake at least once.
| giraffetree chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
I enjoyed this fic, but one thing got my attention. Break is blind, but many times you wrote that he "saw this" or "saw that".