Reviews for Fourth of July FivePack
Aurabee chapter 5 . 7/10/2010
Loved it! Thanks for the fun.
Aurabee chapter 2 . 7/10/2010
Squeeeee! I loved it and I'll be over here greedily daydreaming about more with these two!
furious kitten chapter 2 . 7/10/2010
Haha I love awkward Edwards.
barbarito chapter 2 . 7/9/2010
Loved it
mujisan chapter 3 . 7/8/2010
Now I want to go to Disney World. So lovely!
mujisan chapter 2 . 7/8/2010
Aw I don't want it to end there! Ms. Nina, you kept me smiling and laughing as soon as it started, especially through Edward's inner monologues. I totally love this. Thank you for writing!
it's simply me n you chapter 4 . 7/8/2010
What a great story. All the best of the 70's - Edward & Bella style!
A-SuperStar13 chapter 2 . 7/8/2010
Great job, loved Emmett getting Edward drunk.
A-SuperStar13 chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
Well this one was different. Loved a little Jane/Bella action.
jmolly chapter 4 . 7/7/2010
Totally cool step back to '76. Loved it.
jmolly chapter 3 . 7/7/2010
Very sweet. I liked it.
casualfan chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
First favorite part (and the part where you give a little teensy glimpse of your greatness):

"I hate hot dogs, too."

"You hate everything that resembles a penis," I observe.


"Bet you love pie." I crack myself up.

PIE. Yes, Jane loves Pie. I know some other people who love pie too.

Second favorite part:

"Yeah. She's puking. This what my vagina did to her. Great. I feel awesome."

This was all sorts of awesome and answered any questions that a reader would have of if they "went there." They so did. And if Hat Guy continues to be how he's being I'm totally going to throw my spine into shipping Jane and Bella. (TomStu carries 3 beers)
acciocedricplease chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
Hey LS,

I came over from Brown Study to read your one-shot. Good work! Update soon!

annniej13 chapter 5 . 7/6/2010
Hi bb! I saw your tweet and clicked. Loved this one shot! So fun and sweet.


pkitten21 chapter 5 . 7/6/2010
Why can't carnies look like Edward? I'd think I might leave everything behind if I could have Carnieward!
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