Reviews for Fourth of July FivePack
pkitten21 chapter 2 . 7/6/2010
Love it! so sweet!
pkitten21 chapter 4 . 7/6/2010
excellent job - great little snapshot! thanks so much!
susayq chapter 4 . 7/6/2010
ooohhh. I really liked this one :)

loca37 chapter 5 . 7/6/2010
This was adorable.
babylopez2008 chapter 5 . 7/6/2010
Ah! That was freakin awesome!

My fave :)

That's really cool about the fortune.

At first I thought it was going to be Jake, when you wrote "Russet"... but VERY nice surprise.
babylopez2008 chapter 3 . 7/6/2010
Aww :)

Bella looked away from Edward and looked behind him causing him to turn around to see what she was staring at so intently. When he turned around, he found Bella shoving a few of his French fries into his mouth.

"You're right. Stolen food tastes better."

So BELLA shoved fries in HIS mouth? How is that stolen? I'm confused... please UNconfuse me.
babylopez2008 chapter 2 . 7/6/2010
Aww... at first it was a bit confusing because of the third person POV.

But once they got to the picnic, everything started to make sense.

Lol Emmett... yeah I would probably do what Edward did, since I totally thought it was kool-aid.
LibraryLady08 chapter 5 . 7/6/2010
Nice 4th story!

Thanks for sharing. :)

obsessedmom chapter 5 . 7/6/2010
The Boy in Blue and Madame Zelda were super!... it makes me want to go on a ferris wheel and I DON'T go on them... it's the only time a have a fear of heights.

babylopez2008 chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
Lol the banter cracks me up!
obsessedmom chapter 4 . 7/6/2010
Loved it! I could totally picture the whole day as they raced around the city. Now I want to know what happens next!

loca37 chapter 2 . 7/6/2010
I might want this particular little shot to continue...
LibraryLady08 chapter 4 . 7/6/2010
That was a crazy chase! Nicely done.

LikeToRead22 chapter 4 . 7/6/2010
This made me smile. This E is super cute. Love the 70s imagery. Thanks for writing!
obsessedmom chapter 3 . 7/6/2010
Happiest Place on Earth made even better! But you really could have continued with post fireworks fireworks.

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