Reviews for Quake 3 New beginnings
Majh chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
Hate to be nit-picky but make a family sounds really weird. As if people clone themselves to "make a family". Personally, it would've sounded better if it was start a family.
Corax2009 chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
Psst... you meant to say "manner" instead of "manor" ;)

Otherwise, this flows well.