Reviews for Chloe Moves to Forks
Guest chapter 1 . 3/11/2014
This author was a great friend of mine, but she passed away in spring of 2011

She would loved to have written more, and I kept this account open so that others could read her stories

Guest chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
Is English not your first language? Your entire dialogue to this story is very stiff, odd, and just weird...It's very mechanical and poorly written..
gosteadyonme chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
I love love love this idea. But you don't need to have the characters saying eachothers names constantly. Its kind of annoying. But other than that its great!
Lil Heaven1985 chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
I like how you did this one, I have one suggestion though maybe flush out the part of how she finds out they are vampires. Chloe loves research (as I've gotten from you) so I'm sure you could really go more into her just taking at stab at what they are :D

Love it though as always :D