|Reviews for More Than Just a Clone (Not Just a Copy of a Man)|
| Guest chapter 37 . 3/5
I loved it so much! I'll keep myself posted on new chapters
| Guest chapter 37 . 2/26
Loved it can't wait for next chapter
| Guest chapter 37 . 2/21
| laloga chapter 37 . 1/24
Gah. Waiting IS the hardest part - for the reader! I'm dying to know how Aayla's doing, and ugh, poor Bly when he learns...though, perhaps there's a daring rescue in the cards for our handsome ARC?
Loved the dream sequence, of course. Downright smoldering! This chapter exemplified the age-old writing advice, "show, don't tell," which was the highlight for me. We're not really *told* that Bly misses Aayla; it's shown in his every action and thought. His dream is smexy as hell, and is such a marked contrast to when he wakes up alone., knowing that she's gone on a mission without him.
Later, he goes to the kitchen and kind of meanders around, without purpose - just trying to get by. He can't even rest without her. (Ughhh...this is so kriffing romantic! Love it!)
Really, really wonderful job showing us just how torn up Bly is without having him angst over her. You put us right in his head, and it's fantastic storytelling. Also, I volunteer to give Bly a nice, long hug. Because reasons.
Looking forward to more! :D
| The-Black-Knight673 chapter 37 . 1/18
Holy... Fucking... SHIT! I'm on the edge of my seat here on Chapter 37!
| mivpus chapter 37 . 1/15
The hardest part, Eh?
Well... There were more aspects to it than the waiting. Lets leave it at that.
Damn... Bly is going to kill someone now. Can't say I wouldn't do the same in his place...
As usual, an excellent chapter. I love how you can have us love a character we only saw in two episodes in the series. Keep it up.
| Zipitnow chapter 37 . 1/15
Oh gosh, this was a great chapter. Definitely worth the wait. Love the how you handle all the characters and their personalities. Always wondered what clones dreamed about...lol, same thing all boys dream about, just like high school. And I'm just going into full reader mode here, so bear with me,...Oh come on! Please don't kill off Aayla, we readers need to have hope for an " adventurous ever after" for this couple, love this paring and how you write them. Even Clan Skirata comes to life under your pen. As always looking forward to the next chapter, and more story for the "Awesome Twosome" (Bly and Aayla). Yay for the writer, you stories rock!
| PadawanCassy chapter 37 . 1/15
I get the feeling that he's gonna be very angry when he finds out that they left his wife behind. Of course, I wouldnt blame him giving them all a piece of his mind. So keep up the wonderful work and post more soon.
| mivpus chapter 36 . 12/24/2013
I think Kal should tell him, including the reason. Damn, Aayla is in deep shit now. Hopefully she gets out before Vader himself arrives.
| mivpus chapter 32 . 12/23/2013
conceived a child, conceived a child, conceived a child!
I know, but that would honestly be the best thing ever in the Clone Wars fandom. And we even know what the child would look like, seeing Cut Laquan's children when Rexie got lost.
| mivpus chapter 29 . 12/23/2013
Your writing is so entertaining, I almost had to do my happy-dance :-)
Ahhhh, love. A marvelous bond that can do so much to soothe the mind and soul. I am glad I found your stories. Aayla/Bly and Ashoka/Rex has long been pairings I wanted to see well done.
You deliver on that.
| mivpus chapter 19 . 12/23/2013
Well I'll be a nug's uncle...
So far this story is just "mindblowing sex" great. I love the conversations in particular.
| mivpus chapter 5 . 12/22/2013
Well I'll be damned, possessed and forsworn!
This chapter was simply amazingly well done. I've always been digging clone-Jedi relationships, and since Secura has been on my long-time list of "survive God dammit!" this is just chapter after chapter of eye-candy.
| laloga chapter 36 . 12/12/2013
I literally gasped and started saying "NO" for several moments. Thank goodness my office door was closed, otherwise I would have gotten some funny looks from my coworkers.
But NOOOO! Aayla! Oh gosh...this is going to kill poor Bly! Is he going to rescue her? Gah! I must know these things, you evil author! ;)
Aside from my poor breaking heart, I enjoyed the kriff out of this chapter, especially seeing Aayla realize that she has to adapt if she's going to survive [sob] in this new galaxy. Watching her and Bardan was nice, and I hope to see more of him in the future. Great job showing that Kal did not trust her; I loved that Ordo wanted to go back for her - because of her connection to Bly - but Kal would not. It felt very in-character.
Wonderful update! I'm on pins and needles for the next one! ;)
| Guest chapter 36 . 12/9/2013