Reviews for Tears of the Sky
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 1 . 1/20/2015
Awww, yeah they are extremely lucky for both the parents and the babies to survive. That's amazing. Great job
RenesmeVivio chapter 1 . 2/26/2014
Awwww this story is so wonderful I like it, glad that you keep them alive and try to be nicer to them !
claire chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
i liked 'maid for the day' better than this one, but it was good!
Kyosuke Nanbu chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
YAY for happy ending, you get a Kookie for that!

Kyo- But in my rule book, happy ending is a negative...

Me-You still got your crash and injuries...

Kyo-...and thats a plus! Good story Ash, Keep it up :D
dingcs chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
I laughed really hard at your post Author Notes. " I was torn between killing them or letting them live. And since I've already killed them twice before, I decided to spare them this time around." You are so nice. Haha.

But anyway. There were alot of things going on in this one-shot. I'm glad they were able to survive especially the babies! Aww how cute. But since their babies are twins... aren't they suppose to look alike? O_o I always think that, but their are twins who don't look alike at all. Like Fraternal twins.

I like this! *thumbs up*
solorachi chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
Wow so remarkable, action, drama, romance, humour it was jam packed with everything and especially TAKUMI. Plus they had babies, naww their so cute - as I'm imagining them in my head.

Really well written, properly organised and I am so relieved you didn't let them die...otherwise I would've cried...:(
hEaRtBrEaKeR19 chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
Sorry for the late update...

Awww... That was a suspense but so dramatic story...

Common, but it made me cry...

I thought that Zoe will die, and so does their 'babies'

But the big surprise is... their twins! WTF! Is there an apocalypse coming? Why twins, it resembles the two freaks- I mean twins...


Love this one-shot _

Curses 119... I always thought about 911...
GohanRULEZ chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
Well done!
JohnP87 chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
what did you mean by killed them twice i dont think i read a story were you had to kill them can you tell me what story it was? by the way good job!
utsukushii04 chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
Oh my gosh! That was so darn cute! I loved how you said babies! My eyes just grew wide and i started to smile! I could just see them with babies! Becaue the show is obviously TAKUMI! TAKUMI! HAHAAAAAHAAA! TAKUMI!

I loved this, again you have done an awesome job!

See youz laterz!