Reviews for What Do You Expect?
alli chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
Wow. That was amazing. I wish I could write stuff like that!
dai-zychains chapter 1 . 3/3/2011
all I have to say is wow!
LoveLittleThings chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
Um?

AMAZING!

That was soooo good. When of the best poems i have read about The Hunger Games. That was so good!

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LoveTheBoyWithTheBread chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
This could have been much improved upon, but it was a good first draft. I could suggest making it longer, and maybe only repeating the "what do you expect" part every stanza. Then only using the "it's the Hunger Games" part at the very end. Also, more details and less blunt facts. It didn't really have an emotional feel to it, even though it seemed like you were trying for one. It was a good start though :)

-Mel.