|Reviews for My Father's Favourite|
| Suzi Waters chapter 3 . 9/14/2010
great story, hope you have time to finish it!
| Pam Harper chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
great story, hope you have time to finish it.
| Caramel chapter 3 . 9/4/2010
I'm loving this story! Can't wait to read more. Please update soon!
| lotchness chapter 3 . 8/22/2010
Loved it! Simply loved it! I hope you're gonna continue this fic, cause seriously...why the hell not? Just wish you'd put a little more Dean pov may be?
| JustOnePogostick chapter 3 . 8/22/2010
That yellow-eyed demon is a sob! I love reading Sammy as all bitchy and crying and girly. So far, my fav scene is the one of Dean cooking breakfast like everything is hunky-dory because that is so Dean-like. I'm a John fan as well, so I'm liking your version of him. Yeah, he can be a bastard at times but at least you're showing us what is feeding it, motivating his actions/words, so great job.
| DancerInTheDark101 chapter 3 . 8/22/2010
Wow. I am really loving this story! It's very realistic and you've got the characteristics of Sam, Dean and John perfect. I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical errors and you've written it in such a way that it's a breeze to read :) Great work.
I'm anxious to see how you are going to take this storyline and what twists and turns you're going to throw in there as well. I will most certainly be keeping an eye on this fic in the future!
Thanks for an amazing read.
| adder574 chapter 3 . 8/19/2010
I'm glad that Dean got to see Sam's play and they got a normal family moment before Dean's chemo.
It had to be hard for John to think about what could and should have been.
Good job with how your writing John. His fear coming out as anger is something I can definitely see happening with the boys when they were younger.
Its typical of Dean to still try and take care of his family while he's the one whose sick and try to act strong so he doesn't scare Sammy. Will we see any of Dean's POV in this story. The treatments have to be painful and he's got to be sacred despite trying to put up a brave front.
Loved the scene with Sam hugging his father, and John acting all fatherly when Dean was sick.
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. I wonder how Dean's going to deal with losing his hair.
| Death-Muncher chapter 3 . 8/16/2010
You've written a really really good story. Keep up the great work. :)
| T chapter 3 . 8/16/2010
Really want to see more! Can't wait :)
| Dudeawesomeshower chapter 3 . 8/15/2010
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH AWESOME ! Absolutely love it ! Great work - poor Dean ! Cannot wait for the next chapter.
| SimplyOut chapter 3 . 8/15/2010
Nice story so far. I'm eager to see what happens next :D
| aniki19 chapter 3 . 8/15/2010
ack! be still my heart...
i think u've outdone urself here...my dear...
this is getting more and more intense with the situation of the family being more n more dire!
oh!its almost too much!but i can't help myself...it's really tormentously fantastic!
dean is really,really sick,huh...oh my gosh...i'm loving it...!
poor sammy...i think he really regret his wish...n i guess john is under a lot of emotional pressure he never thought he could have...to lash out at sammy like that...*passes teddy to all 3 winchesters*
u've made me a very happy gal with each update so...please! keep me grinning in my sad little fantasy existence...
| Magnolia Lane chapter 3 . 8/13/2010
I haven't read much fan fiction lately and have reviewed even less, but this story has inspired me to review. I love the premise, which you have expertly weaved through the 3 chapters. As I'm sitting here watching Faith, I'm struck by the parallels between it and your story. I'm hooked and can't wait for the next chapter.
| penless chapter 3 . 8/13/2010
Hi there! I just wanted to tell you how much I'm enjoying this story. You are doing such a great job on young Sam and Dean. I love the little glimpses into Sam that you are providing us - his not wanting to share a room with pukey Dean, for example. There are so many little touches like that in here, and I love it. Looking forward to more! Thanks very much!
| alwaysateen chapter 3 . 8/12/2010
Poor Dean. What a horrible experience to live through. He's so strong and doesn't want to worry his family.
It's nice to see John's side of the story too, like he's not half as strong as Dean and won't be able to survive if he lose one of his sons.