|Reviews for Tales of Yue's Harem|
| EthernalRain chapter 3 . 12/17/2010
... Dear god... This is ingeniously hilarious... Cannot stop laughing... Now, where's teh Brain Bleach?
| shanejayell chapter 3 . 12/11/2010
You need to have Yue become the lost daughter of Iono. :)
(Read Iono-sama fanatics?)
| tri-rose angel chapter 3 . 12/11/2010
Lol, definitely one of the funniest things I have read. Loved the sibling rivalry. I look forward to the next installment.
| Ryuus2 chapter 3 . 12/11/2010
Words...cannot...describe...they just can't...the awesome hilarity...
Keep up the great work!
| RedSavant chapter 3 . 12/11/2010
You are one twisted guy, SCM. In a good way. A very good way.
Surprisingly little Yue in this chapter of Yue's Harem, though, wasn't there? Gotta love the Queendom of Yue, though.
And Fate and Sextum arguing over Negi.
| korrd chapter 3 . 12/11/2010
Loved it, especially the Kampfer crossover part. I only recently got interested in Kampfer and I'd love to see what you could do with it.
| Tiresias chapter 3 . 12/11/2010
I'm amazed at how people immediately pegged Sextum as another harem candidate AT HER VERY FIRST APPEARANCE!
Then again, her not attacking at once is VERY suspicious indeed :D
| bissek chapter 3 . 12/11/2010
I'm surprised you didn't have Tertium team up with Quartium, Quintium, Sextium, and Septium (OC Averunnucus of Heart) to form Magister Mundus Magicus.
| Huilisti chapter 2 . 9/26/2010
Nearly as good as the previous ones, but still really good :)
My favourite of these is 'Vampires', I can really imagine Eva doing that! (And I hope she would, at least for Stephenie Meyer :P)
Keep up the awesome work~
| shanejayell chapter 2 . 9/26/2010
You should do a 'Vamps go after Twilight' fanfic, if only for the Lols.
| OverMaster chapter 2 . 9/25/2010
A few of them definitely should have been longer, but they were great all the same.
Keep up the wonderful work!
| Ryuus2 chapter 2 . 9/24/2010
...I...need to goooo...*clicks Reveal The Porn button under Hide The Porn button*...*mumbles*where was that Setsuna monkey-witch doujin...
You complained in the last chapter A/N about being bad at NegiLesYay!. Who cares about crack when you write Les-H so well?
Note to self: Give Nodoka a badass fight. Or several. Oh, wait, I was going to do that anyway.
Revised Note: Give Nodoka MORE badass wins.
Keep up the great work!
| RedSavant chapter 2 . 9/24/2010
Oh, SCM. You go so far off-canon, but absolutely no one can say that you don't do it with panache and style.
Looking forward to the next ones - though if you're looking for CC, I'd suggest giving your chapters a once-over outside of spellcheck. There are a few instances where you've got sentence fragments left over, or you miss letters off words. It's all still readable, of course, and devilishly enjoyable; but it looks a little sloppy.
(I loved the image of Nodoka beating Dynamis unconscious. Just gotta say that.)
| HubiKoshi chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
[nods] I'm really quite surprised that not many people took notice of YuexEmily, cause they are such a cute pair, and Emily is such an overprotective Tsundere
Hokay first of all... I laughed my ass off with this one, you wonderfully play with words in order to make the reader laugh.
... This one sure made me feel sad, especially the last line, the last regret, the "I wish I could tell you...". Now... the question is what will happen when Emily will come back from Cosmo Entelecheia ? Cause I won't be surprised if Yue will be involved in her "perfect world"
Mhm now this is an interesting one, exploring Shiori's situation, how will it develop after Negi "befriends" Fate, she is in a rather complicated situation, and it's masterfully shown here.
[grins]Awwww I loved the cute friendship between Colette and Yue and how Yue motivated Colette to become more badass. And now This is added to their relationship, sweet :-3
That Extra Guy
I truly admire Johnny for his intelligence, you really don't want to be around when a bunch of kids out of which Each counts as a potential Person of Mass Destruction starts having fun XD So I should understand that Negi didn't bother with choosing and married his whole harem and had a Babies ever After Happy End ?
Best Friends 2: Sapphic Bangaroo
Mhhrrmm Sweet First a lovely entry and some build-up and then... That, I loved how Yue was unhappy because of Nodoka's reaction only to... realize that Nodoka wasn't unhappy with her, she was just a bit angry that Colette went ahead and did it with Yue Without asking Nodoka to join in on the fun XD
... Just Awesome, two crazy landing in each other's arms, I just love how beautifully Chichigami-sama played Tsukuyomi, finally someone will have this girl on a leash XD
Best Friends 3: The R of the S
"... and make those sounds", jealous Colette XD ? And it's lovely how the love is thrown all around the place, even Bea got in on the fun. Yue truly is the Female Negi XD
Happily Ever After
Indeed, and the fluff between Emily and Yue, but the last line takes the cake, certainly facing an army of fanatical fangirls is NOT WORTH IT, still Megalomesembria Should do something, they aren't as blind as to not see that soon Negi will have the heart of EVERY female in this world in the palm of his hand XD
Ah sorry for the long review ;
| Huilisti chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
...ok, I think my brain just broke down. Please wait a bit while I repair it...
Very well-written and awesome :D Yue is my favourite character and though I prefer her with Negi, I think these pieces were also very good :) I think the boobies and blood -exchange between Paio II and Tsukuyomi was great! The bit about Johnny was really god too!
I'd love to see more Negima fics from you~