Reviews for Awake the beauty inside
TopherBennett chapter 6 . 8/3/2010
Awww... Very, very cute ending. I loved it. I hope you think of some ideas for the sequel soon cause you write Topher and Bennett so perfectly. This fic was adorable and one of my favs. :)
the little harlequin chapter 6 . 8/3/2010
All I can say is, AWESOME! xD I absolutely loved this fic from start to finish! :) Mackenzie and Allison were so adorable and yay for Granny Adelle! I totally have to find a way to make Adelle have some interactions with Neil, Patrick, Harris and Leia in my Rossum High 'verse. I will do everything in my power to make that happen! xD

ANYWAYS, absolutely fabulous work on this fic, it would probably be my personal favourite of all your stories. And, yes, you should totally write a sequel! I hope inspiration hits you soon - I can't wait to read more of your brilliant fanfics! :D
Undirected Passions chapter 6 . 8/3/2010
... I shall keep this chapter, and I shall name it Fluffy! :D Ha ha, awesome awesome awesome ending! I think I "awwd" about thirty times in this chapter! Topher and Bennett are still sweet as ever, Allison and Mackenzie are ADORABLE, and yay for Granny Adelle! XD I'm so sad this fic is over, but it was amazingly awesome, and I would VERY much like a sequel! :)

the little harlequin chapter 5 . 7/22/2010
MELISSA! Do you have any idea how much I love you right now? AHHHH, I was grinning like crazy during *all* of the Kiki scenes, the way you portray her is just awesome! :D

Yay for the inclusion of my boy, Alpha! 'Big A', oh frick, I just burst out laughing and my brothers just stared at me, looking at me as though I were a crazy person.

And a major YAY! for the awesomely epic Topher/Bennett at the end. Just, yes, thank you, thank you, THANK YOU for not keeping them apart for too long.

Really sad that the next chapter will be the last of this fic, yet I'm still very excited to read it. UPDATE SOON!
TopherBennett chapter 5 . 7/22/2010
Aw, I loved this chapter. It definitely wasn't "too much", it was just adorable. I hope you decide to do a sequel. :)
Undirected Passions chapter 5 . 7/21/2010
Aww, this chapter was awesome! Bennett and Topher's mind conversation was really sweet and I love that Alpha showed up. XD Him and Kiki were very funny by the way. Yay Topher woke up! :D But I'm sad to see this fic end! . Epic Topher/Bennett at the end! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D
the little harlequin chapter 4 . 7/20/2010
Yay! An update! xD

This was an awesome chapter, I don't know why you were so nervous about it! I love the AU-ness of this fic and I LOL'd majorly at Kiki when she said that she was Topher's 'good fairy'. (She's a lot nicer in your fic than she was in mine! :P)

And then o_O, Topher only has *seven* days to live. NOOOOOOOOO! *shields him from you* Don't kill Topher, don't kill Topher, don't you *dare* kill Topher. I'm just gonna have to reassure myself with the fact that you love Topher too much to kill him... right? Don't tell me my BFFLs Angst and Despair are getting to you! :P

OK, I really, desperately need to know what happens next so please, please, *please* update soon!

P.S. perhaps include some other Dollhouse 'verse characters in this AU world *cough* ALPHA *cough* *smiles innocently* I'll love you forever if you find a way to include him. :)
Undirected Passions chapter 4 . 7/20/2010
Good fairy! XD I love it! And yay for Perrin showing up! Seven days? NOOOOOOOOO! But you love Topher too much to let him die, Bennett, so I'm still optimistic. :) Nice cliffhanger, I'm SO looking forward to the next chapter! :D

TopherBennett chapter 4 . 7/20/2010
Loving the story so far. Can't wait to see what happens next. :)
the little harlequin chapter 3 . 7/14/2010
Wow. I *love* this AU world. Everything just *fits*. To me, finding out how everything's been changed to suit the story is one of my favourite parts of reading AUs. :)

Anyways, I love how Boyd is Echo's step-father and his girlfriend is Claire. Also I love how Adelle and Dominic are Topher's parents - love, love, love! xD And, Bennett's pregnant! Major o_O.

Can't wait to see where you take this, so please update soon! :D
Undirected Passions chapter 3 . 7/13/2010
Ha ha, yay Echo! :D I dunno why, but her conversation with Topher cracked me up! Anyways, it was really interesting how and where the characters fit in. Boyd as Echo's step-father; I certainly didn't expect that! Anyway, this is a really great chapter and I enjoyed it very much!
Undirected Passions chapter 2 . 7/8/2010
I'm on vacation still so I don't have much time to write a review. (I borrowed *stole* my grandma's laptop to write this. Lol.) Anywhos, this is a great, albeit sad chapter and I can't wait for the next one! Topher can't die, right? T-T
the little harlequin chapter 2 . 7/8/2010
Seriously, *dude*, what are you doing to Topher? *holds onto him protectively*

The poor guy's just lost his baby, was arguing with his wife, crashed his car, is in a coma and might face charges for reckless driving - all in the space of two chapters! (Well done, I approve of all the drama!)

This was an awesome chapter with a totally intriguing cliffhanger. Who is this familiar face? Please update soon! xD
the little harlequin chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
Oh my gosh! You were right, this certainly was a dark chapter! (Have you been hanging around with my friends, Angst and Despair? :P).

But, seriously though, this was wonderfully written. This is one of the first times I've seen you write full-on angst and it turned out very well, I was close to shedding a few tears during the flashback scenes. (Poor Topher and Bennett!)

And, then, the end! Oh my word! What have you done to Topher? I must read more! Please, please, *please* update soon!

(P.S. Sorry it has taken me a while to review, but I was away on vacation!)
ScarecrowMax chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
please continue i need to find out what is happening next.
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