Reviews for The Single Most Cliched Host Club Story Yet
Cowron chapter 1 . 4/8/2015
The sad thing is, is that THIS is more original than what's usually being posted \(uu)/... That makes me sound really rude, huh? This story is actually really good! uωu)b
Zurla Adams chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
I'm pretty sure 75% of my brain just burnt out from reading this...

It was so horribly AWESOME! AHAHAHAHAHAAA! Mary-sues... *Just bows her head and shakes it* Just... no.

RachelPine chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
*still laughing* Hoooollllyyy crap that was hilarious! Sad thing is I wrote a story with a mary-sue character once... (groans) Never. Again. Anyway this was probably the worst story ever but the best parody of Mary-sues I have seen, I love it and yet I hate the stupid mary-sues, amazing job.
Escape-To-The-Stars chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
I think I just died from laughter, just saying.

You are awesome for writing this. I applaud you.
ljusalfheim chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
"SURE! And then we can watch really bad sex tapes that I made with Usa-chan!"

ahahahah I died with that

great parody to the mary sues and the typical "six transfer students" stories
darisu-chan chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
hahahahahahahahaha LOL! Not all the Mary-Sue stories are bad, except when the girls appeared from other countries and such. This made me laugh too hard! Specially in the Edward Cullen parts! hahaha
Ranabanana Thingamabob chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
I must say...pure awesomeness. I wrote Mary-sue story a couple of times by accident but this takes the cake. I bow down to you, Sherbet Christ.
Fairy5706green chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
I am glad that you wrote this parody. I do not really read OCs Ouran fan-fiction much, but I check the site day and see all of these stories repeated over and over, and that's just from reading their descriptions.

I read a lot of stories about author's making fun of Mary-Sues, but this one takes the cake.

Kept on writing!
Zacvh67y chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
Ooh, this made my day. XD

Hooray for this fanfic! About time someone stood up against the Ouran Mary-Sues. XD
AliceinBlunderland chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
Wow, you're an inspiration :D I don't know if I'm being a traitor to my own kind by saying so though since I also write a story with OCs... whoops.
Kasurin chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
Dude! I laughed the whole Time!
MayContainRandomness chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
I LOVED this, you have to do another some day. My favourite bits were the monopoly bit, Haruhi and Terrence, the clothes, Twilight references, evil Kaoru, Mori's gay speech plus everything else inbetween.

Nearly died laughing, you made my day, thank you!

Spider9x chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
There certainly are alot of OC stories out there, never mind mary-sue or not, I have only read and reviewed one to date.

You should capitalise 'sue parody' cos I almost didn't see it and jumped over this story! I personally enjoyed the section dedicated to Kyoya and Rozella the most ;D GOOD JOB!
Noodledonny chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
Oh wow, I completely love this. Forget Naruto, I've seen more Ouran Mary Sues than any other fandom yet. And you have just NAILED every aspect of Ouran Mary Suedom. I applaud you.
wouldsomebody chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
Oh my God, I cannot stop laughing. This is perfect- you pinpointpointed EVERY LAST AWFUL THING in Host Club fanfiction that I've ever read and mocked it wonderfully *applauds for ten minutes straight*

My favorite parts:

"Until, of course, that fateful day in Terrence's second month of life when Mommy #2 (well, they were two lesbian mothers) was violently eaten alive by hobos in a dark alley."

Violently eaten alive by hobos in a dark alley? Do you mind if I borrow that little plot bunny for future possible prody usage?

"I actually thought I was gay for awhile. It didn't help that one night that I hooked up with the entire Football Club-" more taken aback shrieks, "-and believe me, that was ONE HELL OF A NIGHT, BITCHES! Erm, sorry. Where was I..?"

Okay, I have to admit, that part left me in stitches. . .I had to put down my laptop for a little while before I could finish the story . . .

Anyway, KEEP IT UP! You have a talent! xD