|Reviews for Naruto: Chronicles of the Seventh:End of Innocence|
| King of Konoha chapter 14 . 10/12
i know this is an old story and im just now reading it, i normally don review stories this old but i had to for this chapter Nejis speech to tenten at the end bro it had me crying honest tears and im not a sentimental guy but you pulled my heart strings with this one especially the its raining part i couldn't hold back. This story has been amazing the way you have pulled off these characters personalities with just a little of that Ramen Renegade twist has been amazing and the chronicles of the seventh has to be my favorite series on this site hands down. You are an amazing writer and i hope the Seven Sins can stand up to this but with you at the helm im pretty sure it will be.
| FanFan299 chapter 1 . 6/26
This si pretty bad u should alll red mr grimjaws sotries he has the best fics on thebsite!
| icemaxprime chapter 14 . 5/30/2016
My feelings! They wound me!
| Guest chapter 31 . 5/23/2016
Woohoo! At last Sakura's gonna kick some ass , and just not somoe ass but a blue bodied sharkskin samehada wielding ass! Nice chap...
| Guest chapter 25 . 5/22/2016
Sai showed his worth at the right time. i liked how you portrayed him in this chapter tbh , really impressive. Rip Tsume. Her sacrifice was rather sad.
| Guest chapter 23 . 5/22/2016
Liked how the cut the crap and began with the war already , and by the looks of it it's not going easy. Your perspectives on each division actually impresses me a lot. High hopes on the next chap...
| Guest chapter 22 . 5/22/2016
Killed it. Nice chap!
| Guest chapter 14 . 5/20/2016
Loved the last part. This chapter was heavily emotional tbh , which shows how your genres vary. Means you're doing good. Keep it up!
| Guest chapter 12 . 5/20/2016
*Sobs*... This right here is...depressing. RIP Lee. By far this is the best fight scene you ever came up with , hands down. This chapter was the best and I think it even surpassed your climax. I can still hear my heart thumping. This was great *sobs* really great work , but please don't keep it up man. I don't like to cry , it isn't manly you know.
| Guest chapter 11 . 5/20/2016
Lee and Gai were always one of my favourite characters. Tbh sometimes I find them stringer than even Naruto and Sasuke themselves...
| KaiSaeren chapter 14 . 12/21/2015
First of, great story and great writing and all. But OH my god, how can you write so much without actually moving the story forward even an nich :D i have to say this naruto: chronicles of the seventh has pretty much no naruto in while sometimes giving story more detail enhances the experience i think this is toho much. Chapter upon chapter more and more characters and details, flashbacks within flashbacks, i just get post and forget what as even happening with Naruto, you know the main hero. 8 od do chapters before se got the trial which could have been easily fit into the second book only to read how people learned their jutsu and converstions od OC people which are of no import to the story. Kam sorry to sady i skipa lotof the lines just becaue it is not interesting and i actually want to read wht happens next.
Inany case great story, it just may je time to leave this manga style writing and concentrate on the main story, not filler :) sorry about the negtivity, its obvious you put a lot od work into this and its awesome, it just gets sidetracked easily:)
| Wingless Swan chapter 29 . 11/5/2015
Your plot lines got a lot better.
| guest chapter 14 . 8/29/2015
Omg I cried at the end when neji said it was raining
| EazyJPeazy chapter 31 . 11/15/2014
wow i just started reading this collection after the middle finger to storytelling and logic that was the naruto finale. this right here is the reason that i ship narusaku. There growth and mutual chemistry is apparent for all to see and then bam we get a complete 180 just so they can sell part 3 and the movie. sigh let me not work myself into a rage
i just wanted to let you know that i live your stories and that ive seen the preveiws for thise miniseries that you have and they sound hilarious. please continue to write and provide a brigh spot to an otherwise devistated fellow shipper.
| dloold87 chapter 14 . 10/13/2014
...damn you made me cry over Lee's death.. He went out with a bang though, I doubt with an attack like that anything would be left of the one on the receiving end. Good story so far, now on to the next chapter.